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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

While seating in my chair the other day, I wondered how I could become better person. I knew there was nothing standing in my way in the fact. Therefore, I decided to stop wait for the future to find myself and take action immediately. To begin to find a direction, I try to find my greatest strengths and find out that would bring me joy. I wrote out all my goal, what skills I would need to learn or what steps I would take to achieve them. I believe that I can be very success if I keep trying and work hard.

【答案】seating seated

better前面加上a

去掉the

wait waiting

myself me

try tried

that what

goal goals

or and

success successful

【解析】

这是一篇议论文,本文讲述作者要变得更好,于是作者决定停止等待,立即采取行动,作者相信如果努力工作,作者会取得很大的成功。

1. 考查固定搭配。句意:有一天,当我坐在椅子上时,我在想怎样才能成为一个更好的人。seat常用形容词seated作状语。故seating改为seated

2. 考查冠词。person为可数名词,此处泛指“一个更好的人”,故需用不定冠词,故better前面加上a

3. 考查固定搭配。句意:我知道事实上没有什么能阻挡我。固定短语in fact“事实上”,故去掉the

4. 考查非谓语动词。句意:因此,我决定不再等待未来来找我,立即采取行动。短语stop doing sth.“停止做某事”,故wait改为waiting

5. 考查人称代词。表示等着未来来找到我,所以用宾格代词me作宾语。故myself改为me

6. 考查动词时态。句意:为了开始寻找方向,我试着找到我最大的优势,找出什么能给我带来快乐。描述过去的事情,所以用一般过去时态。故try改为tried

7. 考查宾语从句。本句为宾语从句,且从句中缺少主语,表示“……的东西”,所以用what引导。故that改为what

8. 考查名词的数。句意:我写下了我所有的目标,我需要学习什么技能,我将采取什么步骤来实现它们。goal为可数名词,前面有all,所以用复数名词。故goal改为goals

9. 考查连词。根据句意可知,前后句子是并列关系,所以用and连接。故or改为and

10. 考查形容词。句意:我相信,如果我继续努力,努力工作,我一定会成功的。根据上文be可知,应跟形容词作表语,故success改为successful

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I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going?” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running towards the bus stop at top speed,

After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes (独木舟). After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk (游泳裤). For about an hour, we played volleyball happily.

Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for them.

I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put in

an extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the ball further away from me. At that moment, a string of weed (海草)tangled (缠绕) up with my feet and I could not swim properly.

I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,” I thought silently.

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