题目内容
16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
For ages,sailors have said that it is a good luck to see dolphins swimming alongside boats.Their presence meant that land is near,which will be vital informations if a boat and its crew are in danger.Some dolphins have even protected sailors which suffer shipwreck from sharks.There is no wonder that these unique and fascinating creatures have long known as our friends.
Dolphins are thought to be intelligent animals because of its quick ability to learn.They seem to communicate with each other through a combination of whistles and clicks.While scientists don't know exact what they are talking about,it is thought that dolphins are telling each other that food is nearby,or warn each other of approaching dangerous.
分析 本文主要讲述海豚是人类的好朋友.同时,科学家认为海豚能相互告诉彼此食物在附近,提醒彼此间的危险.
解答 For ages,sailors have said that it is a good luck to see dolphins swimming alongside boats.Their presence meant that land is near,which will be vital informations if a boat and its crew are in danger.Some dolphins have even protected sailors which suffer shipwreck from sharks.There is no wonder that these unique and fascinating creatures have long∧known as our friends.
Dolphins are thought to be intelligent animals because of its quick ability to learn.They seem to communicate with each other through a combination of whistles and clicks.While scientists don't know exact what they are talking about,it is thought that dolphins are telling each other that food is nearby,or warn each other of approaching dangerous.
1.去掉a 考查冠词.luck是不可数名词,其前不加不定冠词.
2.meant改为means 考查主谓一致.主语Their presence是单数形式,谓语动词也应用单数形式.
3.informations改为information 考查名词.information是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
4.which改为who/that 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词sailors在从句中作主语,用关系代词who/that.
5.There改为It 考查句子结构.it is no wonder that…是一个句型,意为"难怪…".
6.加been 考查动词语态.be known as意为"被认为是",根据语境用现在完成时的被动语态.
7.its改为their 考查代词.their指代dolphins.
8.exact改为exactly 考查副词. know是动词,要用副词修饰.
9.warn改为warning 考查现在分词. telling和warning都作谓语,都用现在进行时态.
10.dangerous改为danger 考查名词.of是介词,后接名词形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总字数.
2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称.
From:ChinaTravelWangHaixin@hotmail.com |
To:HYPERLINK"mailto:LiMing1984@yahoo.com.cn"LiMing1984@yahoo.com.cn |
Subject:Can you go to Zhangjiajie next month? |
Dear Li Ming, ZhangJiajie city will be holding a tourism and culture festival next month.Can you go to Zhangjiajie and bring back some interesting photos and reports?Let me know your answer and schedule as soon as possible.Thank you. Best wishes Wang Haixing |
13-17July:travel along the Yangtze
18 July:visit Wuhan University
19 July:interview professors about Wuhan University
20-22July:go to Chengdu
21 July:visit some temples of Taoism (道观)
23 July:fly to Xi'an
24-29July:explore places of interest in Xi'an
30 July:return to Beijing
Dear Mr.Wang
Thank you for your email about the tourism and culture festival in Zhangjiajie next month.However,I am afraid I can't go as I have a tight schedule during July,please let me explain.
Yours,
Li Ming.