题目内容
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the summer vacation I think I should do something meaningfully instead of touring. So I got a job at a fast food restaurant and worked there for a cleaner. I work 7 hours a day for three weeks. The job was bored and seemed endless, that made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. After all,I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work earlier in the morning and went to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term. Now, I understand that hard work means. I think it is really a successful experience, which was worth remembering for ever
think 改为thought
meaningfully改为meaningful
for改为 as
boried改为 boring
that改为 which
earlier改为 early
to去掉
a改为 the
that改为 what
was改为 is
【解析】
试题分析:
文章的整体时态使用了一般过去时,此处应该使用一般过去时。故think 改为thought。
此处是修饰不定代词something,故用形容词meaningful,something meaningful有意义的事情。
work as任…职,当… ,担任……工作,而work for 为...工作,句意是当清洁工,故用as.
bored感到乏味,感到厌倦,boring令人厌倦,句意是工作令人厌倦,故用boring。
that和which都可以指物,做主语,但that不能引导非限制性定语从句,故将that改为which。
earlier是比较级,此处没有比较对象,不表比较,故用原级early.
home是副词,前面不用介词to, go home 回家,故将to去掉。
job在上文中已提到,是特指在快餐厅的那份工作,故用定冠词the。
understand后接一个宾语从句,从句中缺宾语,故使用连接代词what。
这次经历是发生在过去,故用一般过去时,故要将is改为was。
考点:考查语法及词汇的运用能力。
点评:短文改错的短文改错方法和技巧 1 首先细读全文,弄懂整篇意思。 在读的过程中吧初步确认的错误标出 2. 然后在葱以下几个方面仔细推敲。(1)动词——查时态,第三人称单数、非谓语动词、语态、主复句失态是否一致 (2)代词——查前后是否一致、 it 的用法以及指示代词、人称代词、不定代词、关系代词的用法是否错误 (3)介词——查搭配及容易误用的介词 (4)形容词、副词——查词性是否混淆,形容词与副词的比较级、最高级的用法,修饰比较级的副词等 (5)名词——查单复数,棵树不可数,是否加冠词the, a或 an,主谓一致问题 。(6)连词——查上下文之间的逻辑关系,是否有误。