题目内容
在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。
●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间
●反复训练重要、易错知识点
●指导方法
●减少作业量以保证质量
●给予鼓励
注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;
3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.
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Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
【解析】
试题分析：本题是写一篇给定要求的书信，写作的话题为给老师提出学习的建议，内容包括建议老师适当放慢进度，留出思考和消化的时间；建议老师反复训练易错的知识点，提供典型试题；建议老师对英语写作进行指导；建议老师布置高质量的练习，安排更少的作业；同时写上对老师的感激以及对于即将到来的测试所表现出来的心情，在写作时应注意书信的格式，同时注意写作内容要符合题意，注重语言的准确性和连贯性。
亮点说明：范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：名词性从句what we need is solid foundation，目的状语从句assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently, 条件状语从句We would appreciate it if…等，语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰；
范文注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时、一般过去时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握；
范文使用了很多固定短语：show down，make sure，in case，from time to time等，使作文内容更加充实；
范文注意使用As you know，Besides，Meanwhile，For example，By the way等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。
考点：书信类作文
