题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,是某某中学的一名学生,为了让更多的人了解中国优秀的传统文化,你校近日将举办中国传统文化展(The Traditional Chinese Fair)。请给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加。邮件的内容包括:
1.展会的宗旨、时间、地点及参加人;
2.展出内容:相关书籍、图片、实物等。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to invite you to the Traditional Chinese Fair to be held by our school at the art center this Friday afternoon, from 2 pm to 5 pm.
Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture, the staff, all the students and their parents, as well as anyone interested in it are welcome. At the fair, relaxed books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture much botter but definitely feel the unique beauty of it.
If you’re interested, please come and enjoy it. And I'd be glad to offer any help. Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是应用文类写作,要求写一封邀请信。要点已给出,根据写作要求和要点,本文可分三段来写:第一段表明写信的目的;第二段介绍展会的相关情况,包括展会的宗旨,时间、地点以及参加人,展出内容等;第三段盛情邀请。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。Since引导原因状语从句:Since this event aims to help more people learn about the traditional Chinese culture;非限制性定语从句的使用:through which visitors will not only understand traditional Chinese culture much better;条件状语从句和祈使句的使用:If you’re interested, please come and enjoy it.