Question

5．假定你是李华，你看到"International Friendship Club"所做的广告后加入了该俱乐部，但他们并没履行相关承诺．请用英语写信给主办方，要求解释以下承诺：
1．退还交友需要的照片；
2．两周内提供六个不同国家的笔友信息；
3．活动不收取任何费用．
注意：
1．词数100左右（开头已经写好，不计入总词数）；
2．可以适当地添加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing to complain about the service I have received from your International Friendship Club．
                                                          

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写信给"International Friendship Club主办方，要求解释一些承诺，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：退还交友需要的照片；两周内提供六个不同国家的笔友信息；活动不收取任何费用．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为写信目的．第二部分为需主办方解释的事宜．第三部分为期待答复
重点短语与句型：
complain about 抱怨…
In addition 除了
 to make matters worse使事情更糟
be disappointed with 对…失望
高分句型一：I am writing to complain about the service that  I have received from your International Friendship Club．
此句用了定语从句
高分句型二：Finally，to make matters worse，you said this was a free service to students，but I received a bill of￡20 last week，which I do not think I should pay．此句用了宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing to complain about the service that  I have received from your International Friendship Club．（高分句型一）（ 写信目的）
I joined your club a month ago，and you have not offered me the things you promised in your advertisement．You said that you would return photographs immediately，but I am still waiting for them after one month．In addition，you said that you would send me the details of penfriends in 6 different countries within 2 weeks．Now four weeks have passed and I have only received 2 names and letters．Finally，to make matters worse，you said this was a free service to students，but I received a bill of￡20 last week，which I do not think I should pay．（高分句型二）I am very disappointed with your service and would like you to explain the problems immediately．（需主办方解释的事宜）
Looking forward to hearing from you．（期待答复）
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．