题目内容
【题目】书面表达
好的心情可以使我们感到愉快、幸福。但是怎样才能保持一个好的心情呢?请你根据以下提示,以How to keep a good mood.为题用英语写一篇短文。
1. 保持健康
2. 好好休息
3. 回忆过去令自已高兴的事情
4. 多考虑事情的积极方面
注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
How to keep a good mood.
A good mood makes us comfortable and happy. However, it’s not easy to keep a good mood especially when we’re faced with troubles. Then, how can we keep a good mood?
To begin with, we should keep healthy. It’s known to us that a weak body always has a negative effect on our mood. Secondly, it’s essential to have a good rest. Rest plays a very important role in maintaining our mental health. Thirdly, it’s beneficial to recall those which make us happy. Memories of those things contribute to a good mood. Lastly, think the positive aspect of everything; don’t live life full of worries. By doing these, we can keep a good mood.
【解析】
试题分析:本文的话题,保持良好心态,对于学生来说比较熟悉的,但是在写作的过程注意一下几点:①文章的时态,本文应以一般现在时为主或者表示建议的情态动词为主;②注意要点写全,不能写漏其中一点并且注意要点之间的承接;③注意要点的条理性。因此考生应努力把自己掌握的较为复杂的句型和高级表达法运用到写作中去,以增加亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如it’s not easy to keep a good mood especially when we’re faced with troubles。此外,文章还使用了大量短语plays a very important role in,be beneficial to,contribute to等短语。副词however,to begin with, secondly的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。