题目内容
12.研究表明,笑对身体有利.请根据以下要点,用英语写一篇以Laughing is good for health为题的短文.笑的好处:1.忘却烦恼,减轻痛苦;
2.保持良好心情和积极态度;
3.易交友;
4.活得更久、更有活力.
注意:可根据要点适当发挥,或增加其他观点,使文章自然流畅.
词数:100左右(短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Laughing is Good for Health
Many studies show that laughing is good for our health.
分析 本题是提纲类作文写作,文章题材和体裁已经给出,无需考生过多考虑.而考生重点要注意审题,只有做好了审题环节才能保证写作的有效性和目的性.审题主要要做到以下几点:①分清层次和段落,切勿平铺直叙,"一逗到底".②句式﹑词汇要尽量多样,恰当使用较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇. ③文章衔接紧密,过渡自然,恰当使用好连接词或过渡性词汇.④注意书写的整齐、美观,并正确使用标点符号.
亮点句型一:laughing can help us forget about worries and anxieties and keep us in a good mood,so that we will have a positive attitude toward life.笑可以帮助我们忘记忧虑和焦虑,使我们保持良好的心情,使我们对生活有一个积极的态度.这句话用了so that 引导结构状语从句.
亮点句型二:laughing can even help reduce pain,making us feel more comfortable.笑甚至可以帮助减轻疼痛,使我们感到更舒适.这句话用了making现在分词做伴随状语,
亮点句型三:if you often laugh or smile,people around you will be infected by it,which is helpful in making more friends.如果你经常笑或笑,你周围的人会感染它,这有助于交更多的朋友.这句话是非限制性定语从句,which指代前边整个句子的意思.
解答 Laughing Is Good for Health
Many studies show that laughing is good for our health,and I have the same opinion.The reasons are as follows.First,laughing can help us forget about worries and anxieties and keep us in a good mood,so that we will have a positive attitude toward life.(亮点句型一)Second,laughing can even help reduce pain,making us feel more comfortable.(亮点句型二)Third,if you often laugh or smile,people around you will be infected by it,which is helpful in making more friends.(亮点句型三) Last,doctors have discovered that people who laugh a lot are healthy and live longer.In fact,laughing is a means of exercise.So I think if we want to enjoy a longer life,we should set aside our worries and laugh often.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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