题目内容
3.假如你是中学生李华,你在学校食堂就餐的过程中,发现学生浪费饭菜的行为十分严重,你深感痛心和羞愧.请给校长写一封信.1.说明写信的目的;
2.对这些行为进行批评;
3.提出切实可行的建议.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结束语已为你写好.
参考词汇:学校食堂 school cafeteria
Dear Mr.Headmaster,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior Three.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua.
分析 高分句型一:
As we all know,some people at home and abroad are suffering from hunger seriously
高分句型二:
In order to solve the problem,some measures should be taken by our school
句型一 As we all know,该句是一个由as 引导的非限制性定语从句,as在句中替代后面整个主句的内容
句型二 ①In order to solve the problem 该部分使用了不定式位于句首作目的状语
②some measures should be taken by our school 该句的谓语部分使用了一个固定的短语:take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事,此句中使用了被动
此外,该文章还使用了以下高级词汇和重要短语:
throw away 扔掉
suffer from…遭受…
take measures 采取措施
set up regulations 建立规章制度
get rid of 消除,去掉
解答 Dear Mr Headmaster,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Senior 3.I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students-wasting food in the school cafeteria.Some of them throw away a little food while others waste most of them just because the food is not so delicious.As we all know,some people at home and abroad are suffering from hunger seriously.(高分句型一)I always feel painful and ashamed whenever I see this.It is obviously inappropriate for students to waste food.(提出论点)
In order to solve the problem,some measures should be taken by our school.(高分句型二)First,all the students are made to understand that a great number of people don't have adequate food,which may help them realize how terrible it is to waste food.What's more,I wonder if our school can set up specific regulations against such behaviors.提出解决办法)I believe that the bad habit will be got rid of soon with our joint efforts.
I hope my suggestions will be useful.
yours faithfully
Li Hua
点评 该书面表达为提纲类,该类写作一般规定了考生的写作思路.考生在写作时应注意将所给要点与主题紧密结合在一起,运用准确的、简洁明了的语言将文章阐述清楚.
A. | ashamed | B. | guilty | C. | ignorant | D. | innocent |
A. | where | B. | that | C. | which | D. | whose |
A. | delicate | B. | accurate | C. | automatic | D. | flexible |