Question

【题目】面对繁重的学业负担，很多学生出现了不同程度的心理和身体方面的不适。鉴于此种情况，中学生应该学会放松。假入你是中学生李华，请以How to Relax Ourselves为题写一篇文章给《21世纪英语报》投稿

内容包括：

1. 为什么要学会自我放松；

2. 自我放松的途径（如看电视﹑上网﹑体育锻炼﹑旅游等）

3. 你更喜欢哪种自我放松方式及原因

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

How to Relax Ourselves

Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students

Answer 1

【答案】

Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students often feel tired both psychologically and mentally. If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on our life and study. In view of this, we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves. As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.

As for me, I prefer surfing the Internet in my spare time. For one thing, the Internet provides me with a wide range of activities for relaxation. Sometimes I keep track of the latest news as an entertainment. I also play computer games to relax myself. For another, the Internet gives me easy access to making friends with people at home and abroad. Furthermore, the vivid pictures on the Internet can greatly refresh me when I feel tired.

【解析】

试题分析：面对繁重的学业负担，很多学生出现了不同程度的心理和身体方面的不适。鉴于此种情况，中学生应该学会放松。假入你是中学生李华，请以How to Relax Ourselves为题写一篇文章给《21世纪英语报》投稿。内容包括：1.为什么要学会自我放松；2.自我放松的途径（如看电视﹑上网﹑体育锻炼﹑旅游等）

你更喜欢哪种自我放松方式及原。注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。写作时不要逐句翻译，要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用简单句。

【亮点说明】Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students often feel tired both psychologically and mentally.过去分词作状语；If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on our life and study.句中运用了条件状语从句；In view of this, we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves. 运用了In view of和are supposed to learn两个高级词组；As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句；For one thing，---For another,这种句式运用巧妙；Furthermore, the vivid pictures on the Internet can greatly refresh me when I feel tired.句中使用了高级词汇Furthermore,和时间状语从句。