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【题目】2月28日柴静的一部名叫《穹顶之下》的纪录片在微信朋友圈被疯传，几乎是一瞬间，这部有关雾霾调查的纪录片席卷了整个中国。这部片子从公众健康的角度唤起了大家对雾霾这种大气污染问题的重视。

假如你是李华，BBC记者Bill来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请按下面写一封电子邮件,开头已给出。

介绍情况:

(1)最近发生数次雾霾天气。

(2)通过《穹顶之下》，人们更进一步认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生。

(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么。

注意：词数100左右

雾霾：smog 穹顶之下：Under the Dome

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter, thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.

Recently the smog has occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life. Many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy smog weather, more and more people have to go to see the doctor because the serious disease caused by the smog. Anyway, people’s life is greatly affected.

With the help of Under the Dome, People have further realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the smog weather.

As far as I’m aware, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere.in addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment as possible as they can. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：2月28日柴静的一部名叫《穹顶之下》的纪录片在微信朋友圈被疯传，几乎是一瞬间，这部有关雾霾调查的纪录片席卷了整个中国。这部片子从公众健康的角度唤起了大家对雾霾这种大气污染问题的重视。假如你是李华，BBC记者Bill来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请按下面写一封电子邮件,开头已给出。介绍情况: (1)最近发生数次雾霾天气。(2)通过《穹顶之下》，人们更进一步认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生。(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：词数100左右。

【亮点说明】Recently the smog has occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life.句中使用了现在完成时态；Many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy smog weather, more and more people have to go to see the doctor because the serious disease caused by the smog.句中运用了原因状语从句和比较级；With the help of Under the Dome, People have further realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment.高级词组、宾语从句和过去分词作定语完美结合在一起；As far as I’m aware, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere.句中恰到好处地运用了并列句；另外，As far as I’m aware，in addition, as possible as they can，looking forward to等的使用，使文章更加严密，安排更加合理。