Question

【题目】假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你身边的很多同学被近视、超重等健康问题困扰。请你就此事用英语给美籍校长Mr. Smith写一封信。内容主要包括：

1. 陈述同学中存在的健康问题；

2. 提出建议(举办健康知识讲座、增加学生感兴趣的活动等)。

注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)；

2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Three

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Three. Many students in our school are either wearing glasses because of their poor eyesight or overweight due to lack of enough exercise. Therefore, I’m writing to give my suggestions on how to improve students’ heath. In my view, first, it’s important to give us lectures on health regularly. Besides, many students dislike doing sports because what they can do after class is only running around the playground. We would enjoy exercising if there were more types of exercises. By the way, more sports events could be held to give us a way to develop team spirits and other good characters. I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你身边的很多同学被近视、超重等健康问题困扰。请你就此事用英语给美籍校长Mr. Smith写一封信。内容主要包括:1 .陈述同学中存在的健康问题；2 .提出建议(举办健康知识讲座、增加学生感兴趣的活动等)。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：because of（因为），poor eyesight（近视），lack of（缺乏）；in my view（在我看来）；take into consideration（考虑）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。