Question

10．假设你是李杰，你在美国已经留学一年，你的同学小明写信想了解你的情况．请按要求写回信从两方面介绍你的留学经历．
1．遇到的问题

	解决的办法
语言障碍	上预科课，参加志愿者活动，寄宿当地人家庭
学业要求不同	主动学习

2．你的收获
注意：词数 120 左右
已给的开头结尾不计入词数
Dear Xiao Ming，
Thanks for your letter．I am happy to share my study and life in America．
                                                                           
How's your life lately？I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Jie．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语fit in wel适应；contribute to有助于；adapt to适应；be different from与…不同；Having been here for a year，I fit in quite well now despite some difficulties．这个句子运用到非谓语动词；On arrival，the first thing I became aware of here was the language barrier．这个句子运用到定语从句；Meanwhile，participating in voluntary work and living with a host family contribute to my communicating skills．这个句子运用到动名词做主语；

解答 Dear Xiao Ming，
    Thanks for your letter．I am happy to share my study and life in America． Having been here for a year，I fit in quite well now despite some difficulties．（高分句型一）
    On arrival，the first thing I became aware of here was the language barrier．People don't talk as they do on our listening tapes．So I enrolled in a preparation course to improve my English．Meanwhile，participating in voluntary work and living with a host family contribute to my communicating skills．（高分句型二）
    Secondly，I had to adapt to the academic requirements，which are totally different from those in China．（高分句型三）Having failed several times，I found it necessary to learn autonomously to find ways out．（高分句型四）
    My life is a lot easier now．In many ways my experience has urged me to work harder and become more independent．
    How's your life lately？I am looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Jie

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．