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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词． 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Annie Oakley became famous as her ability to shoot a gun and hitting very small objects．There are hundred of stories about her．However，much of the stories aren't true．She was a performer in a traveling Wild West show．She used her skill at shooting a gun to become one of most famous sharpshooters in American history．She decided to help with her family earn money when she was 8．She taught herself what to shoot her grandfather's gun and began hunting animals for money．By the time she was 15，she has made enough money to pay for her family's farm．Soon his ability to shoot a gun became wide known in her town．

分析 本文讲述了有关美国著名的神枪手Annie Oakley 的故事；文中主要提到了她成长为一名神枪手的经历以及她的知名度．

解答 Annie Oakley became famous as her ability to shoot a gun and hitting 
                                           for                                             hit
very small objects．There are hundred of stories about her．However，
                                            hundreds
much of the stories aren't true．She was a performer in a traveling Wild 
many
West show．She used her skill at shooting a gun to become one of∧most 
                                                                                                 the 
famous sharpshooters in American history．She decided to help with her family 
                                                                                              去掉with       
earn money when she was 8．She taught herself what to shoot her grandfather's 
                                                                        how
gun and began hunting animals for money．By the time she was 15，she has made 
                                                                                                          had 
enough money to pay for her family's farm．Soon his ability to shoot a gun became 
                                                                         her  
wide known in her town．
widely

答案：
1．将as改为for  考查固定短语"be/become famous for"因…而著名，这里指的是：Annie Oakley 因能用枪射中很小的目标而闻名；故用for
2．将hitting改为hit   考查动词的形式   此处与to shoot a gun 一起在句中作定语，由于此处用在and之后，故可以省略动词不定式符号to；故用hit
3．将hundred 改为hundreds    考查量词   由于此处hundred之前没有具体的数词修饰，故hundred之后应加s，即：hundreds of意为：成百上千；故用hundreds   
4．将much改为many    考查代词     此处用来指代复数名词stories；故用many
5．在most的前面加the   考查形容词的最高级   此处用在形容词many的最高级形式most之前；故在most的前面加the   
6．去掉with     考查动词     由于help是及物动词，因此它的后面可以直接跟宾语；此处考查的是短语help sb．do sth．：帮助某人做某事；故去掉with
7．将what改为how     考查特殊疑问词   本句的意思是：她教会了自己如何使用她祖父的枪，并开始打猎赚钱；此处的意思应是：怎样，如何；故用how
8．将has改为had  考查时态    根据句中的时间状语"By the time+一般过去时（she was 15）"，可知此处应使用过去完成时；故用had
9．将his改为her    考查人称的一致性   根据上文可知，这里指的应是她（Annie Oakley ）的射击的本领；故用her
10．将wide改为widely    考查副词  此处用来修饰动词known，故用副词widely

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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