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4．On the first day of her work，Sally found that a class full of problems was waiting for her．Six teachers had quit before her．When she walked in to the classroom，it was chaos：two boys were fighting in the far corner，yet the rest of the class seemed not to notice them； some girls were chatting and some were running about； paper，food packages and other garbage were littered around…Just when she was about to speak，a student rushed in and pushed her aside!He was twenty minutes late!
Sally walked onto the platform，picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard："Rule 1：We are family!"All students stopped to look at her．And she continued with Rule 2，Rule 3…In the following weeks，Sally worked out 10class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom．She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them．
Surprisingly，Sally was not driven out like the former teachers； instead，she won respect from the students．Over the year，she witnessed gradual change in the class．At the graduation ceremony，just as she expected，she was very proud to stand with a class of care，manners and confidence．

[写作内容]
1．用约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）你们班最突出的问题是什么？
（2）针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？
（3）你认为班规会带来什么影响？
[写作要求]
（1）作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
（2）作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本作文是读写任务型写作，这型作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：confronted with（面对），worked out（制定出），earned respect（赢得尊敬），lack of（缺乏），giving rise to（造成，导致），address the issue（处理事情）．

解答 Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class，Sally emphasized the idea of"we are family"and afterwards worked out 10 rules to regulate the students'conduct．Amazingly，she earned respect from her students，all of whom later grew to be confident，considerate and well-behaved．（概括）
       The most obvious problem with our class is lack of interaction or teamwork．Everyone is minding his or her own business without the slightest attention to the people around．，thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the play of their potential．（问题）【高分句型】
        To address the issue concerned，I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teachers and completed by every study group consisting of four students．【高分句型】The final presentation on the following Monday will be a result of group work．（班规）
        From where I stand，this rule will definitely exert a profound and far-reaching effect on students'academic performance．First and foremost，a harmonious but competitive interaction in a group will help everyone's learning．Additionally，we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other greater accomplishments．Last but not least，studying in group can share our experiences in solving problems more efficiently．It is for those reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit．（影响）
        With continuous efforts，our class，a big family，will compose an extraordinary harmonious symphony．

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．