题目内容
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除成修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school,because you find hard to make friends.Now,I'd like to offer you any advice.
Firstly,it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment.Secondly,you should greet your classmates when met them on campus.Thirdly,it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities,what can help them learn more about you.I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.
I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be tine with you for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文主要介绍李华给Jack提的一些在新学校如何结交朋友的建议.首先,在一个新环境里感到孤独是正常的;其次,遇到同学时要问候;其三,积极参加班级活动.作者相信,如果你对别人友好,你是会交到新朋友的.
解答 Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school,because you find∧hard to make friends.Now,I'd like to offer you any advice.
Firstly,it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment.Secondly,you should greet your classmates when met them on campus.Thirdly,it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities,what can help them learn more about you.I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.
I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be tine with you for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua.详解:
1.加it 考查it用法.it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语to make friends.
2.some改为any 考查形容词.some用于肯定句,any用于否定句或疑问句.此处是肯定句,要用some.
3.were改为are 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
4.met改为meeting 考查现在分词.you与meet之间是主谓关系,用"when+现在分词"结构作状语.
5.actively改为active 考查形容词.take an active part in意为"积极参加",是固定搭配.
6.what改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是前面整个句子,在从句中作主语,用关系代词which.
7.unless改为if 考查连词.根据句意:如果你对别人友好.用连词if,unless意为"除非;若不".
8.去掉the 考查词语用法.others泛指"别人"时,其前不用定冠词the.
9.suggestion改为suggestions 考查名词复数.suggestion是可数名词,根据上文可知,给出的建议不止一条,要用复数形式.
10.for改为in 考查介词.in the future意为"今后,将来",是因定搭配.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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A. | Never mind | B. | With pleasure | ||
C. | That's all right | D. | Sure,I will |
通知 活动目的:进一步提高全校师生的应急疏散能力、自我保护能力和安全意识 指挥者:校长 活动地点:学校操场 演练时间:2014 年 11 月 8 日下午 3:30 参加人员:全校师生 注意事项:1.服从引导员的指挥 2.各班按次序撤离 3.保持镇静,不能发生挤、踏、踩等事故 4.安全第一 学生会 2014 年 11 月 7 日 |
2.词数:100 左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)
3.参考词汇:疏散演练:evacuation exercise引导员:guide
NOTICE
Earthquakes are one of the most dangerous among all natural disasters.In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out,an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3:30 p.m.on November 8,2014.(高分句型一) The activity will be commanded by our headmaster.The evacuation exercise is mainly about how to survive an earthquake.We must do as follows.Firstly,everyone must obey the guide's command.Secondly,everyone shall leave the classrooms in order when the alarm clock goes off.Above all,we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise,avoiding pushing and stepping on each other.(高分句型二)
Everyone is required to be present on time,making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies.(高分句型三)Nothing is more important than safety.Safety first!
Students'Union November 7,2014.