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【题目】假设你是李华，你远在美国的笔友Jack对中国的春节很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍春节及中国人是如何过春节的。内容应包括如下要点：
1春节在中国的地位；
2春节的时间、春节来临前及期间人们的活动；
3你对春节的感受。
注意：1可适当发挥使行文连贯，词数100左右；
2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：春节联欢晚会the Spring Festival Gala
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【答案】As the most important festival in China, the Spring Festival is celebrated by most of the Chinese all over the world.
Falling on the first day of the first lunar month, the Spring Festival is a time when people look forward to the end of winter and the coming of spring. On Lunar New Year’s Eve, it’s the custom for Chinese to have a family reunion, eating dumplings and drinking wine, after which they normally stay up and watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the next morning, they are supposed to visit their relatives and neighbors, usually giving young children lucky money in red paper. In the city squares as well as in the countryside, there are celebrations such as dragon dances and fireworks displays. It’s the happiest time in a year when people can enjoy the company of their family, have fun with each other and forget their work for a little while.
As for me, the Spring Festival is a part of our Chinese culture and tradition, which I am proud of. Wherever I am, I will consider it the most important time of a year and try my best to celebrate it with my family.
Sincerely hope my introduction is helpful and look forward to your early reply.
【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假设你是李华，你远在美国的笔友Jack对中国的春节很感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍春节及中国人是如何过春节的。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：内容应包括如下要点：1春节在中国的地位；2春节的时间、春节来临前及期间人们的活动；3你对春节的感受。其次选用正确的人称和时态，表示经常反复发生的动作，用一般现在时，注意描述春节在中国的地位以及春节的时间、春节来临前及期间人们的活动，用第三人称来写，而说明自己对春节的感受，用第一人称。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意:提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: look forward to期待，have fun with玩得高兴。还使用了定语从句Falling on the first day of the first lunar month, the Spring Festival is a time when people look forward to the end of winter and the coming of spring.和定语从句As for me, the Spring Festival is a part of our Chinese culture and tradition, which I am proud of.提升了文章的整体水平。
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