题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,计划暑假去澳大利亚旅行,请给你的澳大利亚网友Tom写一封邮件询问相关信息。内容包括:
1. 当地景点及费用;
2. 当地特色及文化;
3. 注意事项。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:特色specialty
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【答案】Dear Tom,
I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding travels in Australia for the summer vacation.
First of all, what are the best tourist destinations and traveling routes? Secondly, when will be the perfect time for me to enjoy the local specialties and culture? Thirdly, is there any information on the travel costs? I would also like to inquire the special requirements that I should pay much attention to. Could you find some relevant booklets on the above- mentioned aspects for me?
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a response at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题这是一篇提纲类作文,主要是给澳大利亚网友Tom写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 当地景点及费用;2. 当地特色及文化;3. 注意事项。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如provide … with,pay attention to,at one’s convenience;还运用句型:I would also like to inquire the special requirements that I should pay much attention to.这句运用了定语从句;I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me a response at your earliest convenience.这句话运用了it作形式宾语的宾语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如First of all,Secondly,Thirdly等等。