题目内容
14.近期,你校学生会以"高中生该不该参加秋游"为题,在你校展开了调查.请你根据下表的信息,以"Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing"为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,描述此次调查结果并发表你的观点.分析 本文要求以"Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing"为题,写一篇100词左右的英语短文,描述该项调查结果并发表自己的观点.成文时应该:1.首先介绍写作背景,即展开调查的情况;2.正文部分介绍调查的结果,并且介绍支持方和反对方各自的理由;3.发表自己的看法和观点.4.写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语;5.注意高级词汇和句式的使用.
亮点词汇:
表示层次的连接词For one thing,For another,first of all,Next,Firstly,Secondly等;表示因果关系的 as a result,表示总结的personally speaking,表示转折关系的however等.
高分句型:
1.going autumn outing will take up alot of time,which students could spend on study.本句含有which引导的非限制性定语从句.
2.so they need some time to relax and have fun,or they will find it hard to keep going.本句为含有or的并列句.
解答 Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing
In the past few days,the Students'Union has carried out a survey with the title of"Should Senior Students Go Autumn Outing".Here is the result.(引出调查结果)
60% of the students hold the opinion that students should go autumn outing.For one thing,it is agood chance for students to get close to nature where they can breathe in fresh air,which is definitely good for health.For another,students are those who carry a lot of pressure because of so much school work.Going autumn outing can be treated as a time for students to relax themselves,asa result,they are able to study in a better way.
However,the rest say no to going autumn outing.Firstly,they don't think students have mood for enjoying the activity because of heavy school work.Secondly,going autumn outing will take up alot of time,which students could spend on study.(高分句型)
Personally speaking,students will benefit a lot from going autumn outing.(发表观点)First of all,school is not the only place where students can learn.As we all know,they can learn more by dealing witheach other and joining in activities.Next,students are having a stressful life every day,so they need some time to relax and have fun,or they will find it hard to keep going.(高分句型)
点评 本文只要求了主题,内容全凭考生发挥,要尽量运用多样化的句式,注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合,以及使用连接词和插入语.

Recognize the differences between the things you need and the things you want.Our culture provides us with the message that materials will make our lives better.The reality is that most of these things will complicate our lives without bringing true happiness.Free yourself--learn to be satisfied with fewer materials and greater simplicity.
If you let someone else define your life,you're missing the chance to follow your own desires.Your inner life is weakened when you are limited by conformity.Why do you give up your freedom and allowed all of your decisions to be defined by what others think you"should"do?Think for yourself.Let your passions be your guide.
Life is full of opportunities to earn money,give services.Learn new skills and make new friends.Some of us want them all and fill up our timetable with all kind of activities.Rushing from one activity to another leaves you with no time to slow down.No matter how worthy you think your activities are,rethink them.Keep the ones that are most important and leave out the ones that are adding to the pace of your life with little return.
Life is forever changing,and you will never reach a point of simplicity and endless happiness.But each moment you spend on the path to simplicity does have the possibility to bring happiness to your life.
Title:(66)to Find Happiness Through Simplicity | |
Introduction | A busy life will prevent you from (67)achievingthe inner peace. |
Try to (68)simplifyyour life to achieve a peaceful state of mind | |
Free yourself from dependence on (69)materials | (70)Distinguishingthings you need from things you want. |
Learning to be (71)satisfied/contentwith fewer materials and greater simplicity. | |
Think for yourself | Never missing the chance to follow your desires. |
Never being (72)affectedby what others think you"Should"do. | |
Letting your passions be your guide. | |
Rethink all the activities | (73)Leavingtime to slow down rather than fill up every day with activities. |
Keeping the ones that are most important. | |
(74)Conclusion | Each effort to simplify your life may (75)help/makeyou achieve happiness. |
A. | little | B. | much | C. | ever | D. | even |