Question

2．下列四幅图描述了小强一家某一天的经历．请你根据画面及图中的有关提示，用第三人称的口吻写一篇不少于120字左右的短文，你可以适当增加细节，使故事完整连贯并简要描述你对此事的感想．

Answer 1

分析 本书面表达是一篇图画类的写作，要求考生按图片顺序写小强一家为给妈妈过妇女节帮她做家务的过程．要仔细观察分析图画的画面，按照图意写作．并且写作时注意句子的衔接，适当使用连词
同时考生还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般过去时为主．以及使用第三人称．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，适当使用连接词．
重要短语：
 laid the table，布置好桌子，be full of，充满．
高分句子：
Xiao Qiang cleaned the house while his father did some washing．本句中while意为，当…的时候，作连词．

解答 It was March the eighth that day，Women's Day．Xiao Qiang had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it．（点出时间，事件）He asked his father to help him．
     First they decided to do some housework．Xiao Qiang cleaned the house while his father did some washing．（高分句型）Then they made a good meal，cooking fish，pork and some other delicious dishes．Xiao Qiang also laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table．When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table，she felt very curious and happy．Then the family had a pleasant festival．
     Usually，mothers do most of the housework at home to keep everything clean and tide．They love their families．We should show our thanks to them．The best way is to help them with the housework．（总结，点明意义）

点评 看图作文通常有一定得提示，所以在动笔前一定要通读提示，弄懂写作要求，如时间、地点、人物、事件发生地的先后顺序等． 还要根据画面情景展开联想来丰富文章内容．当理解了文章内容时，还可以总结图画思想，升华主题，使文章脱颖而出．