题目内容
【题目】书面表达
第24届冬季运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行,现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华,请根据自己的情况写一封100词左右的英文申请信。内容包括:
1. 热爱体育;
2. 英语流利;
3. 性格外向开朗,有组织能力。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.____________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dir Sir/ Madam,
I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.
I am Li Hua, an 18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, which benefits me in communicating with strangers. Everything taken into account, I think I am a good fit for the position. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and bffer me the opportunity at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
【解析】
试题分析:第24届冬季运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行,现面向社会招募志愿
者。假如你是李华,请根据自己的情况写一封100词左右的英文申请信。内容包括:1.热爱体育;2.英语流利;3.性格外向开朗,有组织能力。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】文中高级句式层出不穷。I am Li Hua, an 18-year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time.句中使用定语从句;I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game.结果状语从句用在句中;Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me more qualified to help foreigners.非限制性定语从句巧妙运用;Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic, which benefits me in communicating with strangers.倒装句和非限制性定语从句经典结合;Everything taken into account, I think I am a good fit for the position. 过去分词的独立主格结构堪称一绝;I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and boffer me the opportunity at your convenience.固定句式再现风采;另外,Besides, Meanwhile,也为文章增色添彩。