题目内容
假如你是李华,现在上高一,你的叔叔现在在美国工作,你觉得父母管得太严,自己解决不了这个问题,于是发邮件给叔叔,希望他跟你父母谈谈,劝说他们改变教育方式,要点如下:
1.学习上要求太高,自己达不到他们的期望值,并经常拿自己和邻居家孩子比,让自己很沮丧;
2.不准看电视、上网;
3.不准自己和女生交朋友;
4.觉得跟父母有代沟(generation gap),不能很好地沟通。
注意:
1.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯;
2.字数120左右;
3.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Uncle,
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Uncle,
How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you my trouble with my parents.
In my opinion, my parents are too strict with me. They expect too much of me but I really can’t live up to their expectations. Besides, they often compare me with my neighbor who is considered better, which makes me rather depressed. And they even don’t allow me to watch TV or surf the Internet because they think it’s a waste of time. What’s more, I can’t make friends with girls because it may influence my study. In one word, I feel that there is a wide generation gap between us, and therefore we can’t communicate with each other freely.
Till now I haven’t found a good solution to these problems. I would be grateful if you could do me a favor to talk to my parents and persuade them to change the way of education. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求给在美国的叔叔写邮件,请叔叔劝父母改变教育方式。写作要点包括:学习上要求过高;不准看电视、上网;不准与异性交朋友;不能跟父母很好地沟通等方面,词数在120词左右,开头饥饿结尾不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文使用了定语从句①who is considered better,②which makes me rather depressed;原因状语从句①because they think it’s a waste of time,②because it may influence my study;宾语从句think it’s a waste of time;表语从句that there is a wide generation gap between us;条件句if you could do me a favor等语法知识,使作文句式多样,在表达上更加具有生动性;
范文注意使用In my opinion, but, Besides, And, What’s more, In one word, and therefore, Till now等词衔接句子和段落,使作文语意连贯、连接紧密;
范文使用了较多的短语和搭配:be strict with, live up to, compare sb with, allow sb to do, make friends with, communicate with, a solution to..., talk to, persuade sb to do, the way of, look forward to...等,使作文内容更加充实,有说服力。
考点:书信类作文
The concept of homeschooling is not a new one. Homeschooling means educating children at home instead of sending them to public or private schools. Nowadays, homeschooling has become popular in many countries for a variety of reasons. One of them is poor quality of education in public schools and it’s also because private schools are quite expensive. Some parents believe that because they know their child’s strengths and weaknesses, they can teach him or her better. Some parents prefer homeschooling so as to prevent their children from getting into bad company. There is another group of people who choose to educate their children at home because they want them to learn spirit and values of the family and also their religious beliefs. They also think that homeschooling would help in development of strong family bonds(家庭纽带).
However, there are some negative effects of homeschooling on students as well as parents.
Homeschooling is a full-time job and not fit for parents who have their own careers. It takes a lot of time for parents’ side to make homeschooling a success. Other family members’ responsibilities may also be affected. They may give their full attention to the needs of their children. Besides, a parent may have high educational qualifications, but that does not make him or her a good teacher. Teaching is an art, which requires the ability to understand the needs of the children. It is likely that the parent might have forgotten what he or she has learned, and the curriculum(课程) of the children would also be different. This would make it difficult for the parents to explain the concepts to their children. Parents also have the responsibility of designing the curriculum of students.
In today’s world, competition(比赛) is seen in every field, and school prepares children to face these competitions. However, homeschooling does not give the children a chance to compare with other kids. They will also not be aware of where they stand in educational position among their classmates. This may affect their future lives. Education is not the only thing that the children need to become successful human beings. It is necessary that they learn to communicate in the society, and public school provides them with such an environment, where they meet many people. Schools also provide children with a chance to take part in various activities to improve their overall development.
It is true that it has many benefits, but one must realize that school teaches children skills to face and survive.
Homeschooling
Definition | Educating children at home instead of in 1.__________ schools or private ones. |
2._________for the popularity | Poor quality of education in public schools and3.__________fees in private schools. Children are taught 4.__________at home. Children are kept away from bad company. Homeschooling is5.__________in strengthening family bonds |
Negatives 6.__________ | For parents: They can’t7.__________on their full-time jobs. They can’t be good 8.___________. |
For children: They can’t get chances to 9.___________ with others. They lack an environment where they meet many people. They can’t join in10.____________activities. |