题目内容
【题目】假如你是外教Daniel James,学生会主席Li Hua代表学校邀请你在2017年9月1日的开学典礼上做个讲话,你接受了邀请并且回信对讲话内容作了简要的安排,主要内容要求如下:
1.感谢学校提供这个教学职位及自己的打算。
2.良好的英语学习习惯、方法的介绍,并阐明英语在现实生活中的重要性。
3.号召全校师生学习一定量的英语。
注意:1.词数120词左右;2.可适当增加细节使文章连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
A lot of sincere thanks for
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Looking forward to meeting you all soon. All the best wishes!
Yours,
Daniel James
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
A lot of thanks for your inviting me to attend the Opening Ceremony of our school and make a speech there. Surely I’ll come and the following are what I will say.
In the first place, I appreciate the chance that I am offered the job by our school. I think I’ll do my best to teach my students well and spare no efforts to help them. Secondly, to learn English well, one has to develop a good habit of study and try to use English as often as possible. As everybody knows, practice makes perfect. In addition, as English is more and more widely used in the world, the importance of it needs no explanation of mine. Therefore, everybody, including both the teachers and the students, needs to learn it. It is really worth our learning.
Now I feel I can’t wait to enjoy the chance to make the speech. Looking forward to meeting you all soon. All the best wishes!
Yours,
Daniel James
【解析】本题考查应用文中的书信的写作。你是外教Daniel James,应学生会主席Li Hua的邀请要在2017年9月1日的开学典礼上做个讲话,你接受了邀请并且回信对讲话内容做简要安排。要点都已经给出,书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括,不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲,考生还要在此基础上增加细节,不要逐字逐句翻译,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时,描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【本文亮点】
在写作中恰当地使用连接词,会使文章过渡自然,连贯通顺,一气呵成。例如本文 用到的连接和过渡词语如:in the first place, secondly, in addition, therefore等等。其他常用的连接词和过渡词还有:first; second; etc. now; for this purpose; but; as a result; furthermore; finally; at last; moreover; also; therefore; likewise; another; for example; next; yet; for instance; on the contrary; once; in addition; in summary; such; in this case; on the other hand; then; otherwise; in conclusion; thus; in closing 等等。