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假如你是李华,针对目前有些中学生购买彩票的现象,给21st Century 报社编辑写信,并谈谈自己的看法,其中包括以下要点:
1.弊远大于利;
2.中学生没有经济来源,容易诱发一些不良行为;
3.从当前说,会影响学习;
4.从长远看,认为仅靠运气就能成功的观念,对学生的一生产生危害。
注意(1)信的开头已经给出;
(2)必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐句翻译;
(3)字数100左右,不包括开头。
Dear editor,
At present, many high school students are addicted to buying lottery tickets and they seem to have good reasons. However, I’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon. ___________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

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解析试题分析:考查议论文写作。本文的话题是中学生购买彩票的现象。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
考点:提纲类作文
点评:本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

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假如你是李华,针对目前有些中学生购买彩票的现象,给21st Century 报社编辑写信,并谈谈自己的看法,其中包括以下要点:

1.弊远大于利;

2.中学生没有经济来源,容易诱发一些不良行为;

3.从当前说,会影响学习;

4.从长远看,会养成事事走捷径的侥幸心理,其危害将影响其一生。

注意(1)信的开头和结尾已经给出;

    (2)必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐句翻译;

    (3)字数100左右,不包括开头、结尾。

Dear editor .

At present , many high school students are addicted to buying lottery tickets and they seem to have good reasons . However , I’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon .

                                                                                         

                                                                                          

                                                                                   

                                                                                       

Therefore , I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now .

Yours ,

Li Hua

假如你是李华,针对目前有些中学生购买彩票的现象,给21st Century 报社编辑写信,并谈谈自己的看法,其中包括以下要点:

1.弊远大于利;

2.中学生没有经济来源,容易诱发一些不良行为;

3.从当前说,会影响学习;

4.从长远看,会养成事事走捷径的侥幸心理,其危害将影响其一生。

注意(1)信的开头和结尾已经给出;

    (2)必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐句翻译;

    (3)字数100左右,不包括开头、结尾。

Dear editor,

At present, many high school students are addicted to buying lottery tickets and they seem to have good reasons. However, I’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon .

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Therefore, I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now .

                                                                                                                       Yours,

Li Hua

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