Question

【题目】书面表达

生活中冲突时有发生。你班同学苏华和李江在上周篮球赛打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。

简要描述事情的经过	打篮球、碰撞(bump into each other)、争执,等等
分析发生冲突的原因	1.遇事不够冷静
	2.…太注重得失…
谈谈避免冲突的做法	(请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)

注意:

1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2.词数100左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如班级、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon,Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest,it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking,pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语To be honest老实说；As a matter of fact事实上；Instead of 而不是；To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life是which引导的非限制性定语从句等。