假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

A city, whether big and small, should be clean. Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life. As we know, a clean city, that disease may be reduced and people’s health may be better, are good both for our mind and body. No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy. However, with more and more people moved into our city, it is not easy to keep our city clean. Beside, some factories will pour waste into the air, the river and onto the ground, making it is hard to keep our city clean. To make our city the better place to live in, we still have a lot to do.

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One day while walking along the bank of a river, a rabbit couple saw a wounded(受伤的) ant lying unconsciously(没有直觉地) on the grass. The rabbit couple gently put the ant on the leaf of a nearby plant. She soon recovered(恢复) and saw the rabbit couple sitting beside her.

The ant remembered that she had found herself under the foot of a cat by chance and fainted(晕倒). She asked how she reached the leaf top. The rabbit couple told her what had happened. The ant thanked them and said she would help them when they needed help.

The rabbit couple went further up the river to enjoy the bright sun. They had been there many times and would spend many hours playing and relaxing in the sun.

One fine day, the couple were again on their way to the river while the ant was playing on the leaf of a tree. She saw the rabbit couple walking towards the river. A few hours later she saw them sleeping peacefully on the soft grass by the river. Suddenly she saw a lion moving towards the grass where the rabbit couple were sleeping. The lion saw the rabbits sleeping, and started walking quietly to attack them.

Realizing the hazard getting close to the rabbits, the ant jumped from the leaf to the lion’s shoulder and bit(咬) the lion’s back. The lion cried out in pain, waking the rabbit couple. The rabbits ran away quickly and the ant jumped off the lion’s back into the grass.

A white pigeon(鸽子) who watched this event cheered at the courage(勇气) of the ant and told the whole story to the rabbits. The rabbit couple were moved and thanked the ant. They became best friends.

1.According to the passage, which of the following is TRUE?

A. The ant was small but clever.

B. The ant was hurt by the lion.

C. The white pigeon was as brave as the ant.

D. The lion wanted to play a joke on the rabbit couple.

2.The underlined word “hazard” in the fifth paragraph probably means “_____”.

A. reality B. danger

C. experience D. warning

3.According to the passage, which is the correct order of the following events?

a. The ant jumped into the grass to hide.

b. The ant bit the lion’s back.

c. The lion moved towards the rabbit couple.

d. The rabbit couple saved the ant.

e. The ant saw the rabbit couple sleeping on the grass.

A. d, c, e, a, b B. e, c, b, a, d

C. d, e, c, b, a D. c, d, e, b, a

4.From the first three paragraphs, we can learn that _____.

A. the rabbit couple put the ant on the leaf of a plant to hide her

B. the rabbit couple often went to the river

C. the rabbit couple and the ant knew each other very well before

D. the ant was wounded after fighting with a cat

The bank worker told me my check had run out. It 1. (take) me some minutes to understand her words. This year had brought me so much pain—a divorce, losing my house and the loss 2.my iob. After 3. (leave) the bank, I wondered what I would do. 4. it was only 5:30 pm, it was already dark and cold outside. At one point, I stopped and cried out to God. With a 5. (break) spirit, I said aloud, "Lord, I really need help right now, today, not tomorrow and not the next day." 6. (final), when my tears dried up, I headed home. Approaching my home, I noticed 7. envelope. The envelope 8. (fill) with hundreds of dollars of gift cards 9. could meet my urgent needs! I was in shock and surprise. God heard those 10. (cry) from a cold, dark and lonely place and assured me that he did hear and would provide.

1.He persuaded some people go back with him to Greenland.

2.Biarni was hoping to join his father which was with Eric.

3.Some fish can produce sounds twice as louder as your speaking voice.

4.I tried to make my brother understand, but he was terrifying and stayed in the boat.

5.The hikes costs $2,500 included all flights and accommodation.

6.He asked Marco to serve in his court and sent him to do many important task.

7.He was also confused by the black stones people used to burning for fuel.

8.Later, these rocks proved that at one time in the distant past the Antarctic is covered by plants.

9.They were hopeful that this would help to save energy, reduce pollution and provide free public transport to everybody.

10.But a lot of people think that solar cars are either too slow nor unreliable.

LOST AND FOUND	ROOMMATES
FOUND：Cat，6 months old，black and white marking. Found near Linden and South U．Steve，800?4661.	FEMALE　ROOMMATE WANTED Own room near campus. Available December 1. Rent $80 per month until March 1st. $129 Thereafter. Call Jill for details.800?7839.
LOST：Gold wire rim glasses in brown case. Campus area. Reward. Call Gregg 800?2896.	Need person to assume lease for own bedroom in apt. near campus，$92/mo.Starting Jan.1st.Call 800?6157 after 5pm.
FOR SALE	HELP WANTED
MOVING：Must sell. TV b/w 12，$50； AM/FM transistor radio A/C or battery，$15；cassette tape recorder，$10；music records. Call John or Pat，800?0739 after 5 pm or weekends.	BABYSITTER—MY HOME If you are available a few hours during the day，some evenings and occasional weekends to care for 2 school?age children，please call Gayle Moore days 800?1111，evenings and weekends 800?4964.
USED FUR COATS and JACKETS. Good condition.$50?$125.Call 800?0436 after 12 noon.	WAITRESS WANTED：10am?2pm or 10：30 am?5pm.Apply in person，207S.Main，Curtis Restaurant.

1.What was lost in campus area according to the LOST AND FOUND ads?

A. A pair of glasses. B. A radio.

C. A Cat. D. A cassette tape recorder.

2.You will call ________ if you want to buy a radio.

A. 800?0436 B. 800?0739

C. 800?4661 D. 800?4964

3.If you want a job of taking care of children，which ad will you answer?

A. LOST AND FOUND B. HELP WANTED

C. FOR SALE D. ROOMMATES

The sun is shining when I get on No. 151 bus. We passengers sit jammed together in heavy clothes. No one speaks. That’s one of the unwritten rules of Chicago commuting. Although we see the same faces every day, we prefer to hide behind our newspapers. The phenomenon is striking: people who sit so close together are using those thin sheets of newsprint to keep their distance.

As the bus approaches the Magnificent Mile, a voice suddenly rings out: “Attention! Attention!” Papers rattle (发出细小声). Necks crane (伸长). “This is your driver speaking.”

We look at the back of the driver’s head. His voice has authority.

“All of you put your papers down.”

The papers come down, an inch at a time. The driver waits. The papers are folded and placed on our laps.

“Now, turn and face the person next to you. Go ahead.”

Amazingly, we all do it. Still, no one smiles.

I face an older woman, her head wrapped tightly in a red scarf. I see her nearly every day. Our eyes meet. We wait, unblinking, for the next order from the driver.

“Now, repeat after me…” It is a command, delivered in the tones of a drill sergeant (操练军士). “Good morning, neighbor!”

Our voices are weak and timid. For many of us, these are the first words we have spoken today. But we say them at the same time, like schoolchildren, to the strangers beside us.

We smile and can’t help it. We have said it; the barrier has been broken. Good morning, neighbor. It is not so hard after all. Some of us repeat it. Others shake hands. Many laugh.

The bus driver says nothing more. He doesn’t need to. Not a single newspaper goes back up. I hear laughter, a warm sound I have never heard before on bus No. 151. This day is starting off better than most.

1.On hearing the sudden utterance of “Attention!”, the passengers ___________.

A. stopped reading and put down their newspapers immediately

B. looked up from the newspapers to see who was speaking

C. sat still without response

D. were frightened

2.The underlined word “commuting” in Paragraph 1 most probably means ___________.

A. daily traveling between home and work B. long-distance ride

C. communication technology D. behavior patterns

3.Which of the following is true according to the passage?

A. The passengers on the crowded bus are so absorbed in reading their newspapers that no one speaks.

B. The passengers are physically close together but mentally they keep each other at a terrible distance.

C. The passengers don’t follow the driver’s instruction at first.

D. When the bus driver says nothing more, the passengers pick up and read their newspapers again.

4.What would be the best title for the text?

A. The Warmth of Communication B. The Exchange of Information

C. The Power of Observation D. The Attitude to Loneliness

—Was the suspect pronounced guilty?

—Yes，the new evidence ________ the first witness' story.

A. confirmed B. claimed

C. declared D. observed

Making Short Videos

“A picture is worth a thousand words or so”, they say. Well, motion (运动) pictures can contain even more memories. 1.Here are some apps you can use to make your own short videos.

Qupeiyin.cn

Reciting lines from movies is an effective and classic way to learn English. So what if you could dub(配音) recordings accompanied by movie clips(剪辑) and then share them with friends? 2.You name it. By contributing your voice, you can either mimic(模仿) the original soundtrack or create something completely new of your own.

Shorts

3.With the help of the Shorts app, you can make pictures in your album into a slide show. Choose from any of the off-the-shelf themes---“holiday”, “travel”, “friendship” and “party” for example—each matched with its own theme music and slide background. But if you’re not satisfied with the combinations, feel free to do a little change by adding text to the pictures or replacing the music with something in your own playlist.

Viva Video

Video making and editing once seemed awfully hard. 4.But this app will ease you into the field with straight-forward functions and clear direction to help you “create your own video story”. Apart from filter, stickers and text, the coolest part of this app is that you can write the narratives yourself and add your own voice to the video. 5.Viva Video requires a relatively powerful phone to run smoothly.

A. But here is a little reminder.

B. That’s why short videos are becoming popular.

C. These apps have a variety of identifications (识别).

D. This app has movies, cartoons, lectures, TV series.

E. Newbies (网络新手) and amateurs didn’t dare to even give it a try.

F. Videos and pictures aren’t only for separate purposes.

G. Video making and editing is what Apple fans want to try.

The 18?year?old girl from Linyi，Shandong Province scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications.

On Aug.19，Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was due to receive student funding.Following the call，Xu transferred a 9,900?yuan “activation fee” into the man’s bank account，hoping the money would appear in her student account，but it never did.

After discovering they had been cheated，the family immediately reported the incident to the police，but Xu was said to be frustrated.On their way home，she suddenly fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her，she passed away.

The death of Xu Yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society，and once again，it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺诈)．

So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?

Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee’s information online.The information includes the examinee’s name，school，phone number，and address.The personal information of examinee has become the target of the online fraud industry.

写作内容

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个词就“Personal information leakage”谈谈你的看法和感受，内容包括：

(1)简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性；

(2)就如何保护个人信息提几点建议(至少两点)。

写作要求

1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3．不必写标题。

评分标准

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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