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20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Jack，
How are things going？Today I'm writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor．I want to have the pen friend，hopefully，a girl about 20years old，and with interests similarly to mine．In my mind，he should be interested in traveling，swimming，and playing tennis．However，it'd be better for her to have a pet dog，as I've been kept one a!home for 3years．Last but not least，she mustn't tells lies．With such a pen friend，I believe I will improve my English by do so and learn more about her countries．
I am looking forward hearing from you soon．
Kind regards，
Li Hua．

分析 本文主要讲述作者要求Jack给介绍一位笔友．要求笔友是一个大约20岁的女孩，与作者的兴趣相似，对旅游，游泳和打网球有兴趣，还有要养狗，最后一点是不能说谎．作者相信，有这样一位笔友，作者一定能提高英语．

解答 Dear Jack，
How are things going？Today I'm writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor．I want to have the pen friend，hopefully，a girl about 20years old，and with interests similarly to mine．In my mind，he should be interested in traveling，swimming，and playing tennis．However，it'd be better for her to have a pet dog，as I've been kept one at home for 3years．Last but not least，she mustn't tells lies．With such a pen friend，I believe I will improve my English by do so and learn more about her countries．
I am looking forward∧hearing from you soon．
Kind regards，
Li Hua．详解：
1．that改为if/whether 考查连词．根据句意：今天我写信问你是否能帮我一个忙．用连词if/whether．
2．the改为a 考查冠词．pen friend是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
3．similarly改为similar 考查形容词．interests是名词，要用形容词短语作后置定语．
4．he改为she 考查代词．指代前文提到的a girl．
5．However改为Besides/Furthermore/Moreover 考查副词．前后两个分句之间是顺承关系而非转折关系，用副词Besides/Furthermore/Moreover．
6．去掉been或kept改为keeping 考查动词语态．I与keep之间是主谓关系，用现在完成时主动语态；或现在完成进行时的主动语态．
7．tells改为tell 考查情态动词．must后接动词原形．
8．do改为doing 考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时有动名词形式．
9．countries改为country 考查名词．"她的国家"一般只有一个，用单数形式．
10．加to 考查固定搭配．look forward to意为"期望，盼望"，是固定搭配．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
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15．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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42．A．findingB．to findC．foundD．find
43．A．makeB．loseC．payD．spend
44．A．In other wordsB．In a wordC．By the wayD．In the way
45．A．mustB．shouldC．shallD．need
46．A．WhileB．IfC．AsD．Since
47．A．yourB．yoursC．yourselfD．you
48．A．pulledB．pushedC．shutD．kicked
49．A．ratherB．evenC．rightD．only
50．A．went downB．stayed onC．calmed downD．looked on
51．A．anythingB．somethingC．nothingD．everything
52．A．after allB．in allC．above allD．at all
53．A．sleepingB．awakeC，sleepyD．crying
54．A．overB．withC．throughD．on
55．A．temperB．abilityC．consciousnessD．awareness
56．A．stealingB．findingC．reachingD．searching
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58．A．manyB．muchC．moreD．some
59．A．didB．doC．gotD．had
60．A．chargeB．spareC．shareD．buy
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45．A．expectationB．suggestionC．discussionD．results
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47．A．congratulateB．greetC．apologizeD．complain
48．A．get rid ofB．make up forC．put up withD．take advantage of
49．A．excuseB．faultC．responsibilityD．business
50．A．insistedB．predictedC．realizedD．pretended
51．A．finallyB．naturallyC．immediatelyD．gradually
52．A．worseB．poorerC．busierD．better
53．A．leaveB．goC．giveD．fail
54．A．presentB．shareC．receiveD．collect
55．A．reply toB．practiceC．correctD．take back
56．A．flowersB．friendshipC．moneyD．appreciations
57．A．giftB．warningC．letterD．email
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59．A．satisfactionB．convenienceC．troubleD．sorrow
60．A．eitherB．bothC．allD．none

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