题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom打算在中国上学,请你帮他咨询入学要办的相关手续。他将于下周六上午10点到达北京大兴国际机场,询问你能否到机场接他。请你给他写一封回信。要点包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 具体回复入学的相关事宜(护照、租房证明、体检证明);
3. 接机的具体时间和地点。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:体检证明 Health Certificate
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I'm glad to receive your letter.
Welcome to China. As for your going to the nearby school, I have sought advice from the school. You can choose any nearby school as long as you take your passport, the proof for renting an apartment and Health Certificate. I'm sure that you are welcome to study here. It's my pleasure to meet you at the airport. I'll be at Beijing Daxing International Airport at 9:50 next Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit. And I will be in a red jacket, so you won't miss me.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in China and I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给打算在中国上学并请你帮忙咨询入学要办的相关手续的英国朋友Tom,告知他相关事宜和借机时间地点。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 表示欢迎;
2. 具体回复入学的相关事宜(护照、租房证明、体检证明);
3. 接机的具体时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
seek…from…;as long as;rent an apartment;Health Certificate;be welcome to do;look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I have sought advice from the school.
2. You can choose any nearby school as long as you take your passport, the proof for renting an apartment and Health Certificate.
3. I'm sure that you are welcome to study here.
4. I'm looking forward to your coming.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改