Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处, 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词汇。

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处记)不计分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldn't understand “real music”· After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer 1

【答案】

【小题1】learn---learning

【小题2】Therefore---However

【小题3】the ---a

【小题4】started --start

【小题5】all---both

【小题6】that---which.

【小题7】Here---- There

【小题8】too---so

【小题9】choose后加 from

【小题10】importantly---important

【解析】

【小题1】“花费时间做某事”spend sometime doing something，因此learn---learning

【小题2】尽管“我”很小就开始练小提琴，但是当时不懂得真正的音乐，前后句是转折关系，因果关系不符合语境，因此Therefore---However。

【小题3】“我的一个朋友”a friend of mine .表示泛指，定冠词the ---a 。

【小题4】“建议”后面的宾语从句要用虚拟语气，谓语动词用should+动词原形，should可以省略，因此 started --start 。

【小题5】 这里指“我的朋友和我”是两个人，不是指所有人，因此all---both。

【小题6】 先行词是 day，在定语从句中作宾语，介词后用which，that---which.

【小题7】在吉他店那里，不是这里，因此Here---- There 。

【小题8】“如此多. . .以至于” so . . . that，因此too---so 。

【小题9】可以从中选择，缺少介词from，因此 choose后加 from

【小题10】系动词后用形容词，importantly---important。