Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mary,

  I am Senior 3 student. I’m going to take part in this summer’s college entrance examination. In preparation for it , I am studying every hard. As a result, I often feel exhausting both physically and mentally. Therefore, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. I know the y have great expectations for me , but I feel the pressure is too heavy for me not to cope with. I attempted to communicating with them, but failed.

  Now I quite upset about it .How can my parents understand us ? I really don’t know how to do . Could you please give me some advice?

  Looking forward to your reply. 

                                                                                  Yours

                                                                                   LiH

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 在am 和senior 加 a

 exhausting改为exhausted

 therefore 改为however

 to 改为on

  not to cope 去掉not

  communicating 改为 communicate

  I 后面加am

  us 改为me

  how 改为what

 advices 改为advice

【解析】

 在am 和senior 加 a              题意为我是一个高三的学生。缺少冠词。

 exhausting改为exhausted           结果我身心疲惫。Be exhausted 筋疲力尽。

 therefore 改为however             然而我的父母给我了我很大的压力，表示转折

 to 改为on                        考查固定短语put pressure on sb 给某人施加压力。

  not to cope 去掉not               我感觉压力太大而不能处理。Too ….to  太。。而不能，故根本需要否定词

  communicating 改为 communicate   考查动词短语，attempt to do 试图做某事

  I 后面加am                      考查短语 be upset about 对，，感到不安，缺少系动词。

  us 改为me                       本文以第一人称来叙述，故用me.

  how 改为what                    固定搭配 what to do 如何做。

 advices 改为advice                advice 是不可数名词，故不能用复数形式。