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2.假定你是李华,是一名中学生.在一位名叫worried的学生的博客上,你看到如下内容:
I am a high school student in Grade 3.My parents always expect me to be admitted into a famous university,which makes me very sad.Though I work hard,I find it difficult to live up to their expectations.What shall I do?
请根据以上博客的内容,回复这位学生.要点如下:
1.表示同情;2.陈述自己的看法;3.提出几点建议.
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Worried,
I am Li Hua,a seventeen-year-old high school student.I know from your blog you're upset these days,because your parents expect you to be admitted into a famous university.I'm writing to offer you some advice.
A lot of parents want their children to stand out in their dreams,so many of us live under pressure.Actually if we try our best and work harder,we can make greater progress in our lessons and do better in the exam.It doesn't matter whether we enter a famous university.
I advise you to concentrate on your lessons.Don't care too much about what others say.Besides,you should believe in yourself.I'm sure you can go to a famous university if you try your best.Finally,why not talk with your parents,making them aware of how you are feeling?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Yours sincerely,
LiHua.

分析 本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容.认真看清题目要求,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系.写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采.
亮点句型一:It doesn't matter whether we enter a famous university.我们是否进入名牌大学并不重要.本句是一个主语从句.it在句中做形式主语,真正的主语是 whether we enter a famous university.
亮点句型二:Finally,why not talk with your parents,making them aware of how you are feeling?最后,为什么不跟你的父母谈谈,让他们知道你的感受呢?本句中making them aware of how you are feeling,是非谓语动词在句中做状语.you 与动词make之间是主谓关系.

解答 Dear Worried,
  I am Li Hua,a seventeen-year-old high school student.I know from your blog you're upset these days,because your parents expect you to be admitted into a famous university.I'm writing to offer you some advice.
  A lot of parents want their children to stand out in their dreams,so many of us live under pressure.Actually if we try our best and work harder,we can make greater progress in our lessons and do better in the exam.It doesn't matter whether we enter a famous university.(亮点句型一)
  I advise you to concentrate on your lessons.Don't care too much about what others say.Besides,you should believe in yourself.I'm sure you can go to a famous university if you try your best.Finally,why not talk with your parents,making them aware of how you are feeling?(亮点句型二)
                                                                                                                           Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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