题目内容
假设你叫李华,你的美国朋友John给你发了一封电子邮件,和你分享了他的寒假计划,并询问你的寒假打算。请你根据以下提示用英语给他回封电子邮件,词数为60字左右。
你的寒假计划:
1.好好复习所学知识;2。读几本好书;和朋友相聚;3。和家人欢度春节……
注意:文章的开头已给出(100词左右);可以适当增加细节。
参考词汇:review,the Spring Festival
Dear John,
I’m so pleased to receive your e-mail about your holiday plan and glad to share mine with you.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
Dear Johm;
I am so glad to receive your E-mail about your holiday plan and glad to share mine with you.
First of all, I am going to review what I have learnt to lay a firm basis for the future study.
Secondly, I plan to read several good books which I am interested in to enrich my mind.
Thirdly, winter vacation is a good time for friends to meet face to face. Not only can we share what we are going through with each other, but alsoI can turn to them for advice on something that I can not deal with.
Fourthly, the Spring Festival is a time for families and relatives to get together to have fun. Besides, my classmates and I will go to sunshine nursing home and bring our joy to the elderly who suffer loneliness during the Spring Festival. It must be a good experience.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假设你叫李华,你的美国朋友John给你发了一封电子邮件,和你分享了他的寒假计划,并询问你的寒假打算。请你根据以下提示用英语给他回封电子邮件,词数为60字左右。你的寒假计划:1.好好复习所学知识;2。读几本好书;和朋友相聚;3。和家人欢度春节……。要把所提示的点写全,把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子,可根据内容要点适当增加细节,写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。避免全部使用简单句,根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩,注意要求的字数在100词左右,不要太多或太少。邮件的开头落款已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】First of all, I am going to review what I have learnt to lay a firm basis for the future study. First of all在开头的使用尽显句子风采,另外句中也使用了what引导的宾语从句;Secondly, I plan to read several good books which I am interested in to enrich my mind.此句运用了which引导的限制性定语从句;Not only can we share what we are going through with each other, but alsoI can turn to them for advice on something that I can not deal with. Not only…but also…在句中使用了部分倒装,给文章增色添彩,同时还运用了what引导的宾语从句,that引导的定语从句,使句子结构严谨高档;Besides, my classmates and I will go to sunshine nursing home and bring our joy to the elderly who suffer loneliness during the Spring Festival.句中使用了并列谓语,并含有一个who引导的限制性定语从句。另外,First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, Fourthly,它们的使用彰显文章段落分明,层次清晰。
考点:考查邮件形式的话题作文。