Question

13．假如你叫李华，今年寒假马上来临，某公司要招聘临时翻译，你向该公司交一份申请书，谋求这个职位．可从个人英语水平、类似工作学习经历、与人交往能力等方面进行阐述．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的抬头和落款已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
Dear Sir or Madam，
In an advertisement I know that your company is in need of a temporary interpreter．I would like to apply for the job．（写信目的）
Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．（高分句型一）I took great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．（高分句型二）Thanks to my fluent spoken English，I'll be equal to the job．I once participated in an English speaking contest and finished first place and that proved my perfect oral English and enhanced my confidence．（高分句型三）（个人英语水平及工作经历）Besides，I'm outgoing and like communicating with others，and as a result，I make friends with people from all walks of life．I can keep a calm mind even facing strangers，which may assure me to be a qualified interpreter．（高分句型四） （交际能力）
In a word，I'm full self-confident that I can get the position and do it well．（高分句型五）（衷心希望）
Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．
Yours faithfully
Li Hua

Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 假如你叫李华，上个月刚刚高中毕业，某公司要招聘临时翻译，你向该公司递交一份申请书，谋求这个职位．可从个人英语水平、类似工作学习经历、与人交往能力等方面进行阐述．这是一篇提纲类作文，需要考生用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，应注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
【亮点说明】文章简洁明了，把需要表达的要点清晰的表达了出来，并且做了适当的扩展，其间也运用了一些连接词和高级的句型．Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．我已经学习英语十年了，很好的完成这件事．现在分词作状语．great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．我在很小的年纪就对英语产生了很大的兴趣，这对我的英语水平有很大的好处．这一句采用了非限制性定语从句来表达．最后一句Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．感谢你的考虑，期待你尽快的回复．以表期望，这种求职信中经常会用到．文章中还有一些短语用得恰到好处，比如in need of急需；Thanks to因为，后面只能接名词不能接句子；In a word总之等等．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
     In an advertisement I know that your company is in need of a temporary interpreter．I would like to apply for the job．（写信目的）
     Having learned English for ten years，I can well manage it．（高分句型一）I took great interest in English from early years，which must contribute greatly to my English level．（高分句型二）Thanks to my fluent spoken English，I'll be equal to the job．I once participated in an English speaking contest and finished first place and that proved my perfect oral English and enhanced my confidence．（高分句型三）（个人英语水平及工作经历）Besides，I'm outgoing and like communicating with others，and as a result，I make friends with people from all walks of life．I can keep a calm mind even facing strangers，which may assure me to be a qualified interpreter．（高分句型四） （交际能力）
      In a word，I'm full self-confident that I can get the position and do it well．（高分句型五）（衷心希望）
      Thank you for your consideration．I wish to get your answer soon．
                                                                                                                                                            Yours faithfully
                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．