假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
       增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
       删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
       修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
       注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
On my fourteen birthday，I received lots of presents．Which present is the best in my eye？It's hand-made notebook，that my best friend Jane gave to me．Jane makes it by herself．On each page of the notebook，there's a picture for Jane and me with some words．She either encourages me or t ell me how she feels about our friendship．Every time I look at the notebook，I'm touching by something warm．This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together．I will be keep this special gift forever．

分析本文主要讲述一份特殊的生日礼物．它是由作者最好的朋友Jane赠送的，是一本手工制作的笔记本，每页上有一幅作者和Jane的照片，带有一些温暖的话语．作者表示要永远保持这份特殊的礼物．

解答 On my fourteen birthday，I received lots of presents．Which present is the best in my eye？It's∧hand-made notebook，that my best friend Jane gave to me．Jane makes it by herself．On each page of the notebook，there's a picture for Jane and me with some words．She either encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship．Every time I look at the notebook，I'm touching by something warm．This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together．I will be keep this special gift forever．
详解：
1．fourteen改为fourteenth 考查序数词．根据句意：在我第十四上生日．用序数词fourteenth．
2．eye改为eyes 考查名词复数．一个人两只眼睛，要用复数形式．
3．加a 考查冠词．notebook是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
4．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词notebook在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
5．makes改为made 考查动词时态．此处指已发生的动作，要用一般过去时态．
6．for改为of 考查介词．根据句意：有一幅带有话语的Jane和我的照片．用介词of，意为"…的"．
7．tell改为tells 考查动词时态．encourages和tells由either…or…连接，作she的并列谓语，都用一般现在时单数三人称形式．
8．touching改为touched 考查动词时态和语态．根据句意：我被温暖的话语感动了．用一般现在时的被动语态．
9．wonderfully改为wonderful 考查副词． time是名词，要用形容词修饰．
10．去掉be 考查句子结构．根据句意：我会永远保持这份特殊的礼物．用一般将来时态，be是多余的，要去掉．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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6．It's always a good idea to have a second key somewhere you lose the first one．（　　）

3．If I had worn warmer clothes，I a cold．（　　）

	A．	won't catch		B．	won't have caught
	C．	wouldn't catch		D．	wouldn't have caught

2．Eddie's father used to say he'd spent so many years by the ocean，breathing seawater．Now，away from that ocean，in the hospital bed，his body began to look like a beached fish．His condition went from fair to stable and from stable to serious．Friends went from saying，"He'll be home in a day，"to"He'll be home in a week．"In his father's absence，Eddie helped out at the pier （码头），working evenings after his taxi job．
When Eddie was a teenager，if he ever complained or seemed bored with the pier，his father would shout，"What？This isn't good enough for you？"And later，when he'd suggested Eddie take a job there after high school，Eddie almost laughed，and his father again said，"What？This isn't enough good for you？"And before Eddie went to the war，when he'd talked of marrying Marguerite and becoming an engineer，his father said，"What？This isn't enough good for you？"
And now，regardless of all that，here he was，at the pier，doing his father's labor．
Parents rarely let go of their children，so children let go of them．They move on．They move away．It is not until much later，as the heart weakens，that children understand：their stories，and all their accomplishments sit on top of the stories of their mothers and fathers，stones and stones，beneath the waters of their lives．
Finally，one night，at his mother's urging，Eddie visited the hospital．He entered the room slowly．His father，who for years had refused to speak to Eddie，now lacked the strength to even try．
"Don't sweat it，kid，"the other workers told him．"Your old man will pull through．He is the toughest man we've seen．"
When the news came that his father had died，Eddie felt the emptiest kind of anger，the kind that circled in its cage．
In the weeks that followed，Eddie's mother lived in a confused state．She spoke to her husband as if he were still there．She yelled at him to turn down the radio．She cooked enough food for two．One night，when Eddie offered to help with the dishes，she said，"Your father will put them away．"Eddie put a hand on her shoulder．"Mom，"he said，softly，"Dad's gone．"
"Gone where？"
56．In paragraph 4，the writer indicates thatC．
A．children like moving away from their parents
B．children often feel regretful because they leave their parents
C．children wouldn't have achieved so much without their parents'support
D．children can never understand how much their parents have devoted to them
57．The underlined sentence probably means"B"．
A．Don't give up
B．Don't worry about it
C．Don't let him down
D．Don't touch it
58．Which of the following shows the right order of the story？D
a．Eddie's father died．b．Eddie worked as a taxi driver．
c．Eddie married Marguerite．d．Eddie was bored with his father's job．
A．bacd         B．dcab             C．bcda           D．dcba
59．From the last part of the passage，we learn thatD．
A．Eddie's mother liked to listen to the radio
B．Eddie often helped his mother wash the dishes
C．Eddie and his wife lived in his mother's apartment
D．Eddie's mother missed her husband so much that she was at a loss．

12．Many people think dreams are full of messages that may not be clear to us common people．But if we think about what is going on in our lives，we can usually come up with an answer．Let's look at some of the most common dreams．What do these dreams mean？
Falling
You're falling，falling，falling…and then you wake up．Thi s dream is said to mean you are afraid of something or worried about something．There may be something in your life that is out of control and there is nothing you can do to stop it．Another explanation is that you may experience failure in something．Maybe you're not doing well in school or work．
Taking an exam（or forgetting that you have one）
You suddenly realize you have to take an exam at that very moment．You might be running here and there to find your classroom．Experts say this dream may mean you're being tested about something or maybe you are facing a challenge．
Flying
Dreaming that you are flying means you are on top of things．You are in control of the things that matter to you．It may also mean you have confidence in yourself and think no one and nothing can beat you．
Trying to run，but going nowhere
You're trying to run，but either of your legs won't move or you simply aren't going anywhere．Some experts think this dream means you're trying to do too many things at once and can't catch up or move forward．
In fact，unlike these dreams，there are also many strange dreams that experts may not be able to explain．
（81）Title：What do dreams mean？

Descriptions of dreams	Answers to dreams
Falling	You have something to fear or （82）worryabout． You （83）failin something like schooling or work．
Taking an exam （or forgetting that you have one）	You're being tested about something or facing something （84）challenging/difficult．
Flying	You're able to control what （85）mattersto you． You believe in yourself and think you can （86）beatanyone and anything．
Trying to run，but going （87）nowhere	You're trying to do too many things at the same （88）time，which prevents you from （89）moving forward．
Conclusion：We can come up with （90）explanationsabout some dreams，but not all the dreams．

19．Although Lu Xun Park is not a very large park，it has aunique（独特的） style as a symbol of Qingdao．

16．Please state your name，age andoccupation（职业）．

17．From now on，never spend your precious time thinking of reasons for your failures and shortcomings．Instead，realize that the seeds of success were planted within you when you were born．Only you have the power to make those seeds grow．
The seeds，and the power to grow them，are contained in the most awesome machine ever created：the human mind．Success is a choice and not a chance．You were born a winner．You were born rich．You can be a success if only you make the right choice．
You cannot be successful without first developing your self-esteem．Your level of self-esteem is always based on the degree of control that you are able to exercise over yourself，and thus over your life．People with low self-esteem are people who do not believe that they have any power，or responsibility for their lives．They are the perennial（长期的） victims and martyrs（殉道者）．They are leaves tossed （摇摆） by the winds of chance blown about with any sudden change in the weather．
You can exercise control over your life only to the degree that you believe that you are responsible for everything that happens in your life．Failures think that everything happens by accident and chance．Successful people realize that they are responsible．
Everything happens as a result of something．If we can identify the cause，we can control the effect．We are responsible for what we choose to think and believe．One generally rises to the level that one expects．We are responsible for setting our expectations．Our success is dependent upon our level of confidence．
If you associate with positive-thinking people，you are definitely going to achieve success．On the contrary，the opposite happens．We are responsible for finding，planting，and nurturing the seeds that contain future victory，born from setbacks．
In short，in all areas of your life，whether they be financial，physical，emotional，or spiritual，you are responsible．Once you recognize this，accept it，and firmly believe it，you are on the road to success．
56．People with low self-confidence are compared to leaves because theyD．
A．are ready to change their minds
B．are easily affected by windy weather
C．don't have the power to face their fate
D．can't control themselves in life
57．Losers would think thatB．
A．success is the result of hard work
C．their failure is only because of bad luck
B．working hard will lead to success
D．they don't make efforts to succeed
58．It can be inferred from paragraph 5thatD．
A．setting our expectations is essential before taking action
B．developing confidence is the key to future success
C．thoughts and beliefs are the result of creative mind
D．whether we will succeed depends on our attitudes
59．The last paragraph serves asC．
A．the proof of the author's points
B．an introduction to another topic
C．the conclusion of the argument
D．a comparison between two views．
60．Which is the best title for the text？C．
A．Develop our confidence．
B．The secrets of success．
C．Success is a choice．
D．How to achieve success．

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