Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院（Confucius Institute）学习，你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词（poetry）比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy，

I’m pleased to learn you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute. I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you. It came as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture, especially Chinese poetry, and you’ve been studying in a local Confucius Institute for years. I’m so proud to see all your efforts have paid off. I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country.

Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲式作文。文章内容要点已经给出。

考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。

2. 给出了部分提示：表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。

但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

1.I’m pleased to learn you’ve just won first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute. Learn后面连接的是宾语从句和 held过去分词作定语。

2. you’ve been studying in a local Confucius Institute for years. have been studying现在完成进行时的运用

3. came as no surprise 和have a better understanding of高分短语的使用。