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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today my daughter and I went to sell eggs at a parking lot.It is a really cold day.I didn't even want to go outside. As we pulled into parking lot,we saw a man sat on the side of the road.He was holding a paper plate which said "I need help!".

He was still sitting there as we left for the parking lot,and I asked my daughter "Should they get him some food and some money?"and she said "OK.".So I pulled up next to him,got out of the car,but gave him all my egg money.I still had another dozen egg in the car,and asked if he wanted them,but he said no.I felt freezing just standing there talking with him for a minute,and he must have been sitting there since hours.

I'm glad we stopped,got out of the car and talked with him for a minute.I hope he will have a warm and comfort place to sleep tonight.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】第一处：因为整段用的是过去式，故is应该改为was。

第二处：由于此处可通过语境可知这里是特指一个停车场，故此处应加一个the。

第三处：这里是固定搭配see sb doing sth，故sat改为sitting。

第四处：这里是固定用法离开某地是用leave sp，故这里应去掉for。

第五处：此处根据语境可知这里是问我们应该给他一些食物吗，故they改为we。

第六处：这里是表达一个并列关系而非转折，故but改为and。

第七处：egg是可数名词，所以当前面没有冠词的时候用复数，故egg改为eggs。

第八处：这里freezing是形容事物的而frozen是形容人的，故freezing改frozen。

第九处：这里for+时间表示的是一段时间而且前面的时态用的是现在完成进行时，故since改为for。

第十处：这里应该用形容词与前面的warm相对应，故comfort改为comfortable。