Question

【题目】随着高考的日益临近，有些同学患上了“考前焦虑症”（pre-exam anxiety )，他们睡眠质量不好，吃饭不香，甚至上课都不能集中思想，为此，《学生英语报》的一个专栏向你约稿，征求你对此事的看法，请你用英文写一篇100—120字左右的短文，要点应包括：

1. 适量运动，放松自己；

2. 均衡饮食，保证营养；

3. 调整生物钟，确保睡眠。

注意：1.可以适当增加内容，使短文连贯。

2．参考词汇：生物钟biological clock

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Answer 1

【答案】With the entrance Examination drawing near, some students are suffering from pre-examination anxiety. They can't sleep well, nor can they concentrate themselves on their studies. However, these, I think, can be solved by sticking to some useful tips. First of all, you should relax yourself by doing a proper amount of exercise. Besides, a balanced and healthy diet can provide sufficient nutrition, thus maintaining a healthy body and mind. So, eat more fruit, vegetables, fish and nuts every day. Last but not least, adjust your biological clock so that you can have a sound sleep before the exam, which can guarantee a higher learning efficiency.

I hope the above tips will work on you.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如 However,So使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.注意语气，此文是写约稿的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。

4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如Last but not least, adjust your biological clock so that you can have a sound sleep before the exam, which can guarantee a higher learning efficiency.

5.多采用一些高级句型，如With the entrance Examination drawing near, some students are suffering from pre-examination anxiety.同时使用一些词组如suffer from，concentrate on，by sticking to， First of all ，Last but not least 等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如 Last but not least, adjust your biological clock so that you can have a sound sleep before the exam, which can guarantee a higher learning efficiency.

文中使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如suffer from，concentrate on，by sticking to， First of all ，Last but not least 等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。