Question

19．【写作内容】
最近，某中学生英文报开设了"After-class Activities"的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动．
1．你校开展课外活动的情况；    2．你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处
3．为同学选择课外活动提出建议  4．为学校开展课外活动提出建议
【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容．
2．文章开头结尾已给出，不计入5个句子之内．
3．可适当增加情节，使表达连贯．
[评分标准]
结构准确、内容完整和篇章连贯．
Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools．___________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于"After-class Activities"的作文，鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：你校开展课外活动的情况； 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；为同学选择课外活动提出建议；为学校开展课外活动提出建议．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为课外活动带来的益处．第二部分为给同学以及学校的建议．
重点短语与句型：
do sb good 对某人有益
enrich one's  knowledge丰富知识
free…from摆脱，免于
高分句型一：Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good．此句用了动名词作主语和which引导的定语从句
高分句型二：Dear friends，please actively take part in after-class activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve you learning．此句用了which引导的非限制性定语从句．

解答 Nowadays，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools．In our school，there are various kinds of activities，for example，arts and sports．We enjoy them very much．Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good（高分句型一）．Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge，they also free me from the heavy work of study．（课外活动带来的益处）
Here I have some suggestions．To students，you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you； to schools，they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework．Dear friends，please actively take part in after-class activities，which will not only make your school life colorful，but also improve you learning．（高分句型二）（给同学以及学校的建议）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．