此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．先对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√),如有错误.则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.在该行右边横线上写出该词.并也用斜线划掉．此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线.在该行右边横线上写出改正� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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2．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．先对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．注意：
⒈原行没有错的不要改；
⒉答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you opinion about water saving．                     （76）my
Water is important．We，as well as animal，cannot live              （77）animals
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go              （78）nor
without it．Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less．         （79）seems
Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water．   （80）they
To deal with a problem，I think，we should first go all                 （81）the/this/that
out to plant trees though trees will help save water．Next，no     （82）because/since/as
drinking water should be left running．Third，we should find      （83）√
ways to reuse the water using in washing，especially bath           （84）used
water for which is quite a lot，and that will save much water．     （85）for
Sincerely，
Li Hua．

分析改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

解答 Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you∧opinion about water saving．
                                 my
Water is important．We，as well as animal，cannot live
                                                       animals
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go
                                                        nor
without it．Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less．
                           seems
Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water．
                                                  they
To deal with a problem，I think，we should first go all
                   the/this/that
out to plant trees though trees will help save water．Next，no
                         because/since/as
drinking water should be left running．Third，we should find

ways to reuse the water using in washing，especially bath
                                      used
water for which is quite a lot，and that will save much water．
Sincerely，
Li Hua．76：在opinion前加my 名词所有格对象应该是我的观点，所以加my
77：animal→animals   animal是可数名词，所以需要用animals
78：or→nor neither…nor 是固定搭配，所以需要改为nor
79：seemed→seems   整篇文章采用的是一般现在时，用seemed与整篇文章时态不符，所以要改为seems
80：we→they 该句子的主语是many countries 前后主语要一致，所以要改为they
81：a→the/this/that   在前面已经提到了problem，所以此时要特指，要改为that/this/the
82：though→because/since/as though一般位于否定句或一般疑问句当中，所以用though与该题不符，要改为because/since/as
83：正确
84：using→used 用used修饰water表示被用过的水，using是主动形式，所以要改为used
85：for which which在该句中引导定语从句，water作为先行词，for不起作用，所以要删掉