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【题目】请你用英文写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍中国科学家屠呦呦，内容主要包括：

1. 屠呦呦，女，1930年出生于浙江；

2. 因在青蒿素疟疾治疗方面的突出贡献于2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖；

3. 她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的中国籍科学家。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：青蒿素artemisinin　疟疾malaria

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Answer 1

【答案】Chinese woman scientist Tu Youyou, who won a share of the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine in 2015, was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province. She won the prize for her amazing contribution to the development of artemisinin, a highly effective treatment for malaria.

Tu Youyou, whose drug has saved millions of lives across the globe, is the first Chinese scientist to win a Nobel Prize in the science. Her winning the prize will help traditional Chinese medicine become better accepted in other countries.

Her success proves that Rome is not built in a day, and we should stick to our dreams until they can be realised.

【解析】试题分析：本文要求用英文写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍中国科学家屠呦呦，内容主要包括：屠呦呦，女，1930年出生于浙江；因在青蒿素疟疾治疗方面的突出贡献于2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖；她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的中国籍科学家。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

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