Question

假设你是某健康杂志的医学顾问Dr White，一名叫李明的中学生来信说，他所在班级近视的学生超过总数的一半，而且大多数学生的视力越来越差，她感到非常担心。请你针对她所说的情况，结合下面要点，用英语给李华回信，告诉她应该如何保护视力。

坚持做眼保健操

定期做视力检查

卧床或乘车时不要看书

不要用手揉眼睛

如无必要，不要戴有色眼镜。

注意：

1．词数：100左右；

2．适当增加细节使行文连贯；

3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Ming,

You’re very kind to care about your classmates.                                     

____________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Dr. White

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

You’re very kind to care about your classmates. It is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. Now I will give you some advice on how to protect your eyesight.

To begin with, don't keep your eyes working for a long time. You'd better have a rest by looking in the long distance after you have studied an hour or so.

Then, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun or in a poor light; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot.

Furthermore, do eye-exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight.

And finally, you’d better not rub your eyes with your hands; and it is bad for your eyesight if you wear colored glasses.

I hope my advice will be helpful to you and your classmates.

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。