Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

(ECNS) -- A woman in Changsha, Hunan province, has caught her fifth-grade son spending 500 yuan (about 80 US dollars) for an online service that will do his winter-holiday homework for him.

The mother said she was disappointed in her son, and shocked that the service was so successful. Numerous ads for businesses that do homework for students could be found online. One shop owner said they could also guarantee that the handwriting style would match each client.

Ghostwriting three exercise books for a fifth-grade student costs about 120 yuan, she added. "But the exact charge will depend on factors such as the complexity of the assignment."

The owner also reminded her customers to buy the service in advance, saying "the fees will increase if customers buy the service at the end of the holiday."

Winter holiday for students starts around the middle of January and lasts about a month.

"We parents definitely won't allow children to buy the service," said Kong.

写作内容

1 请你以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2请你以约120词谈谈人们对此现象的不同看法，内容包括：

1) 人们的不同看法；

2) 你的看法；

3）如何制止这种现象。

【写作要求】

1、作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the popularity of the internet, a most worrying phenomenon has arisen. Some parents find that their children use pocket money to employ someone else to help finish their holiday homework on line.

Some people think homework is assigned to help students review what they have learned. Ghostwriting is kind of cheating, and that also shows some students lack the willpower for independent study. But others hold a different view, who think it's a reflection of students suffering from too much holiday homework. Children’s academic stress should be reduced. But they all agree to forbid ghostwriting online.

In my opinion, the service should be forbidden, and that service providers should be punished. At the same time teachers and parents should pay more attention to the development of children’s sense of independence and the teachers shouldn’t give children too much homework to do. But at the same time parents should be responsible for their children’s behavior when at home.

【解析】

本文是一篇议论文。成文时：1.篇章布局：根据内容要求可以分为三段。开头段用大约30个字来概括故事内容，表明自己的观点，尽量使用涵盖信息量大的长句；在第二段用事例或者引言来证明论点；最后提出自己要如何去做。2.时态：概括故事内容或者讲述自己的经历时使用一般过去时，发表观点看法时使用一般现在时。3.恰当使用连接词或者插入语以使文章内容连贯，层次分明。4.尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式，以提高文章的档次。