Question

【题目】假定你是李华，计划寒假期间到学校实践基地参加为期一周的劳动实践活动。请给你的留学生朋友Frank写封邮件，邀请他起参加。 内容包括:

1.活动安排和内容。

2.活动的意义。

注意:

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头已为你写好。

Dear Frank,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Frank，

We plan to participate in the weeklong labor practice in the school field base scheduled from August 1to8. I'm writing to invite you to join us.

The base offers free accommodations and various activities.Participants can learn to do outdoor work like farming or gardening.The art of making tea, which interests you very much， is also taught.What attracts me most is that we'll learn to raise animals such as goats or rabbits.

In the practice, we can experience the value of labor and expose ourselves to a wide range of practical skills, which will surely benefit us.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份给留学生朋友Frank写一封邀请信。邀请他寒假期间到学校实践基地参加为期一周的劳动实践活动。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.活动安排和内容。

2.活动的意义。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

participate in；learn to do；experience the value of labor

第三步：连词成句

1.We plan to participate in the weeklong labor practice in the school field base

2.Participants can learn to do outdoor work like farming or gardening.

3.In the practice, we can experience the value of labor and expose ourselves to a wide range of practical skills, which will surely benefit us.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：提出邀请；活动内容和意义；盼望回复

2.表示并列补充关系：and；such as ；In the practice

第五步：润色修改