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2．近日教育部（the Ministry of Education）要求加强中小学劳动教育，这一举措引发了人们的热议．请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇新闻报道．

学生的观点	一部分学生：劳动教育有助于身体健康，全面发展 另一部分学生：劳动教育占用学习时间，影响成绩
你的观点	…

注意：1．词数80左右
       2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which arouses a heated debate．
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Answer 1

分析 本文要求写一篇新闻报道，内容是学生对于教育部要求中小学加强劳动教育的观点，写作时注意以下几点：1、涵盖所有内容，首先分两方面陈述学生的观点，最后阐述自己的观点．2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时．3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】所写内容连贯、结构紧凑，运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇．比如：enabling them to be well developed．现在分词做伴随的状语；同位语从句the view that this kind of education will take up their time；非限制性定语从句which will be spent studying otherwise；还有On the other hand 另一方面；as far as I'm concerned，就我而言等短语使语句间连接紧凑．

解答 Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which arouses a heated debate．
     As for students，opinions are divided．Some students think that it will be of great benefit for their health，enabling them to be well developed．（高分句型）On the other hand，some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time，which will be spent studying otherwise．（高分句型）And it will have a negative effect on their grades．
     It's true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays，thus lacking the sense of labor．（高分句型）So as far as I'm concerned，students definitely value more what labor brings about．（高分句型）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．