Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

During the Chinese New Year 2015, more than 3 billion red envelopes were sent and received online via WeChat, the most widely used mobile messaging application in China.

However, shaking out e-envelopes may make you slightly richer, but not necessarily healthier. Billions of Spring Festival e-envelopes exchanged on WeChat led to sleep loss, broken electronics and even injuries as people rushed to shake them open.

A man surnamed Xue in Xi'an city, Shaanxi province experienced a bittersweet Spring Festival this year, thanks to Shake the Envelope. On the Spring Festival Eve, Xue kept shaking the envelopes on WeChat while he was watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV.

Unfortunately, he didn’t get to know if he got any envelopes. Worse still, he dropped his phone accidentally on the floor and the phone bounced against the TV screen. In a second, the screens of both of his phone and his TV cracked.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词对春节微信抢红包的现象进行议论，内容包括：

（1） 你读完这篇短文的感受；

（2） 网上红包与传统纸质红包相比较的利弊；

（3） 你对“春节微信红包”的态度，并说明理由。

【写作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Summary：

During the Spring Festival 2015, many people shook e-envelopes on Wechat, which resulted in various unexpected problems. For example, a man had his cell phone and TV broken while shaking his phone for red envelopes. (35 words)

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇话题作文写作。属于江苏英语高考采用新题型。本书面表达的要求考生首先用30个单词概括所给的文字，然后再给出自己的评判。不管考生是赞成还是反对哪一观点，都要提供足够的理由或者论据。首先，概括部分考查了学生的概括能力，学生再概括的时候要注意语言的精炼性，要点要齐全。其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了，层次分明。最后， 对自己的观点要作出总结。

【亮点说明】范文用了一些高级语法结构：如During the Spring Festival 2015, many people shook e-envelopes on Wechat, which resulted in various unexpected problems.这句话用了which引导非限定性定语从句，For example, a man had his cell phone and TV broken while shaking his phone for red envelopes.这句话运用了现在分词作状语等等。