Question

4．假设你是李华．美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况．请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：
*表示赞成．
*提出你喜欢的栏目．
*简要说明理由．
注意
1．词数100左右．
2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好．
3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
4．参考词汇：栏目一column
June 8
Dear Mr．Green，
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together
It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success．
I would like the magazine to have three columns：News，Teachers'Advice and Students'Voice．From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools．In Teachers'Advice，our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom．Students'Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies．
Yours faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
In Teachers'Advice，our teachers  can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom
因为老师的建议，老师能给我们这样的帮助，可能是无法在课堂上得到的．
高分句型二：
 I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties，and I am looking forward to reading it．
我相信这本杂志一定会加强我们之间的联系，我期待着阅读它．

解答 Dear Mr．Green，
     I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together．It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success．
     I would like the magazine to have three columns：News，Teachers'Advice and Students'Voice．From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools．In Teachers'Advice，our teachers  can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom（高分句型一）．Students'Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies．
     I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties，and I am looking forward to reading it（高分句型二）．
                                                                                                                                   Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                    Li Hu

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．