Question

假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Teddy即将到中国来旅游，他对中国的古文化遗址很感兴趣，尤其是对长城向往已久，请你给Teddy写一封120词左右的e-mail，向他简要介绍一下有关长城的情况：

1. 长城位于中国北部，全长约6,700公里，1987年被列入《世界遗产名录》；

2. 长城从秦朝开始修建，修建长城的最初目的是抵御外来敌人进攻。

3. 长城是古代劳动人民创造的奇迹，是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。

参考词汇：世界遗产名录the World Heritage List；奇迹wonder

Dear Teddy,

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Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Teddy,

I am glad to hear that you will come to China. You’ve told me that you are very interested in ancient Chinese cultural relics, especially the Great Wall. Now, I will give you a brief introduction to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. In 1987, it was added to the World Heritage list. The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies. The Great wall is a wonder that was created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.

Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，本文是介绍中国的伟大奇迹长城，给出部分的要点。本文的难点在于选择合适的词汇把文字提示的内容表达出来，同时要注意选择合适的连接词把各要点连接起来。也要使用多变的句式让文章充满变化，不要过于死板。

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：本文介绍的是中国的长城，要点给出不多。对考生的谋篇布局的能力要求较高，要合理的分布各个要点，用适当的连接词来连接成流畅的短文。在选择词汇时要注意选择一些相对高级的词汇让文章的层次更高。