Question

现在，大多数学生选择住校， 在寝室里同学之间难免会发生一些小摩擦。 上周二晚上十点半，张方和李华发生了争吵（张方开灯学习，疲惫一天的李华无法入睡）,双方都不肯让步......），你当时在场，努力地让他们冷静下来，告知他们同学之间我们都应该彼此理解。他们意识到错误并重修于好。你觉得同学之间应该要互相理解，要交流并包容才能营造和谐的环境。请用英文写一篇关于这件事的短文。词数：100-120。你的文章应包括下列要点：

1.张方和李华发生争吵；2.你帮助解决他们之间的矛盾；3.你的看法。

注：争吵quarrel;  重修于好make up; 包容tolerate （开头已给出）

Creating a harmonious（和谐 ）environment

Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid

quarrels.____________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Creating a harmonious environment

Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. Last Tuesday Zhang Fang stayed up doing her homework after 10:30pm in the dormitory. Feeling tired, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But she couldn't fall asleep with lights on. She got so angry that she lost her temper and quarreled with Zhang Fang. Neither of them would give in and the quarrel continued.

While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their mistakes and made up finally. After all, we share the same school and everyone is part of the big family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文的写作。文章的要点都给了出来，考生需要做的就是把要点翻译成英语即可，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。不要过去堆砌。