Question

1．下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历．请根据画面及图中的有关提示，用第三人称的口吻写一篇词数100个左右的短文．注意：可以适当增加细节，并展开合理的想象，使故事完整连贯．

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分析 题目是要求写一篇看图作文，文章注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水．要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，也不要遗漏要点．尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性．使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次．
【亮点说明】文章第一段第一句是一个强调句． It was March the eighth that day，Women's Day．那天是3月八日，母亲节．强调母亲节的日期3月8日．Women's Day在句中是同位语．第二句是一个that引导的宾语从句，引出told的内容．第二段倒数第二句是一个时间状语从句．When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table，she felt very curious and happy．当他的母亲回来，看到桌子上的美味佳肴，她感到非常好奇和高兴．文章中虽然没有用很复杂的从句，但是结构很有条理．第二段中的first、then等连词用的非常好，体现了图上的顺序．文章第三段第一句，Usually副词前置．固定搭配The best way is to 最好的方式是…．范文完整体现了图上内容，是一篇还不错的作文．
Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it．（高分句型一）
When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table，she felt very curious and happy．（高分句型二）
Usually，mothers do most of the housework at home to keep everything clean and tidy．（高分句型三）

解答 It was March the eighth that day，Women's Day．Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it．（高分句型一）He asked his father to help him．
      First they decided to do some housework．Li Hua cleaned the house while his father did some washing．Then they made a good meal，cooking fish，pork and some other delicious dishes．Li Hua also laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table．When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table，she felt very curious and happy．（高分句型二）Then the family had a pleasant festival．
      Usually，mothers do most of the housework at home to keep everything clean and tidy．（高分句型三）They love their families．We should show our thanks to them．The best way is to help them with the housework．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．