题目内容
【题目】星期天,你班同学们在老师的带领下到学校附近的公园开展了一次环保清洁活动。老师要求你写一篇日记,发表你对此次活动的看法。
1. 你们所做的事情(清理废纸、塑料袋;向游客演讲;设立标牌(sign)等)。
2. 你的看法。
注意: 1)可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯。
2)词数:100左右。
3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Sunday Fine
Today our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park.
【答案】
On arriving there we were surprised to see a dirty ground, so we made a plan to do different things. Some classmates were in charge of collecting the rubbish such as the wasted paper, plastic bags and so on. And others made a speech to tell the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. In addition, there were some students who set up signs to remind visitors to care about the environment.
In my opinion, it is very important for us to protect the environment. The park is a place for us to relax and only when it is clean can we live a healthy life.
【解析】
试题分析:星期天,你班同学们在老师的带领下到学校附近的公园开展了一次环保清洁活动。老师要求你写一篇日记,发表你对此次活动的看法。1. 你们所做的事情(清理废纸、塑料袋;向游客演讲;设立标牌(sign)等)。2. 你的看法。[来写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1)可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯。2)词数:100左右。3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】On arriving there we were surprised to see a dirty ground, so we made a plan to do different things.句中使用了动词不定式、动名词和并列句;Some classmates were in charge of collecting the rubbish such as the wasted paper, plastic bags and so on.固定结构in charge of、such as在句中出现;In addition, there were some students who set up signs to remind visitors to care about the environment.定语从句的运用恰到好处;In my opinion, it is very important for us to protect the environment. It作形式主语,真正的主语是后面的动词不定式复合结构;The park is a place for us to relax and only when it is clean can we live a healthy life.句中使用了时间状语从句。